Hey, this story is great. It's very different from pieces that you find on fictionpress. It seems well thought out, and professionally done. I'm excited to see where this couple leads. I like that they have the love/hate relationship, but it's not the ridiculous kind that seems improbable a relationship would form. Good work! I'll be reading!

This Kim obsession must cease!

Oh, Dorian got played, hehehehe. And brilliantly too, well done.

JM

Yes! I love sexual tension! Muahaha!

Agatha really cracks me up, man... I still think it's hilarious that everyone knows they're faking it and they all just kind of play along... I can't wait til the truth starts coming out between Dorian and Ant and everyone's like, I told you so! Anyways, Agatha...I loved the line at the end of dinner. "Now that that's settled, let's have some pudding." I don't know why but I laughed my butt off, lol. :-)

More, puh-lease! Is the Washington trip next? I hope we get more of that lovely sexual tension... and more Ant and Dorian trying to pretend that they're not insanely attracted to each other.

-Andee :-)

Please don't think I'm being pushy when I ask for...MORE ANT/DORIAN, please! Thanks. (:

Ah...NOW I understand how Ant and Chris can be such good friends and not feel any pull to be together. I should have put that together, but I was distracted by Ant and Dorians development. I think Ant will be making Dorian uncomfortable for a while. Between Jorma and the article, he'll be on the defense for a change. Can't wait!

:D

i liked this chapter as it gave a bit of dorian's perspective on things (Y)

anyways your doing a really good job so far.. and its cool that you update quick.. can't wait till the next chapter.

xx

Fabulous! I wish she would have gotten the seven-page spread, but its still good that she got something. ]

Hello! I just started reading your story these past few days, and I just wanted to pop by and tell you I'm completely enjoying it. You've got interesting characters and a fun (-ish) plot.

I'm not very good at reviewing stories, so I'm sorry if I don't really review much past this. But there are people reading out there!

Ant and Dorian are fantastic. (And I wouldn't mind a little more Chris, either.)

Ant's going to be in some trouble. And I'm really disliking this Judy woman, she acts far too smug. And Dorian's obsession with Kim is really not healthy. He seriously needs to move on to someone else (cough cough Ant).

Damn, I love how she proposed that idea, I actually read the bit out loud to my friend, she thought it was brilliant. I can't wait to see how Ant approaches Dorian with this.

JM

i love this

Uh oh. Why do I get the feeling that Ant is going to be in trouble? Still, Dorian is cocky enough - shouldn't he love having his face plastered in a magazine? A WOMAN'S magazine at that? I mean, he's an eligible bachelor, right? (only he better not be that eligible, cuz our girl Ant has a thing for him and vice versa.) haha. Oh Dorian...how I love you.

Ok, that was creepy.

But woo-hoo for Ant getting the feature story! Here's hoping she kick's Judy's butt to the back pages for a long time. :-) And here's hoping that Dorian doesn't hate her.

The lunch with Chris was too funny. My favorite line of the whole chapter was "Uh, no, it was due to your lack of heterosexuality." HAHA. Funny stuff. :-)

Can't WAIT for Chapter Nine...WOOP WOOP!

-Andee

as they say, i'm lovin' it!

That guy just makes me feel uncomfortable. And part of me feels like Dorian is leaving for a few days cause Ant had a date, which obviously does not have to be the course, but just feels like it to me anyway, hehehe.

JM