Reviews for The Rules of Engagement
andee lee chapter 7 . 1/26/2009
Ha ha, I love Dorian in this chapter. He's too cool for school.

Things are gonna get interesting with another guy in the mix, huh? I like Jorma. He's funny... but like Ant said, where's the spark?

Can't wait for the next one,

-Andee :-)
andee lee chapter 6 . 1/26/2009
Ha ha, I love them together. They're just different enough to keep that interesting banter going, so no, I didn't think this chapter was boring at all.

I'm glad we got into Dorian's head a little - what made him join the Marines and all that - you kind of get a better sense of him and he's just becoming more and more likeable.

On to the next chapter!

Nerdette chapter 7 . 1/26/2009
Good stuff!
sayitstrue chapter 7 . 1/25/2009
Thank you for the update! But. Dorian/Ant... please? :D (even if I'm liking Jorma) Can't wait for your next chapter!
Em Crosthwaite chapter 7 . 1/25/2009
Pride & Prejudice right? At least that's the one that's coming to mind. I like the chemistry that's between Dorian and Ant. Even though I guess it's okay that she has a date, you still know they're going to end up together. After all the other guy doesn't have any soul. (No pun intended.)
Brielle Gemson chapter 7 . 1/25/2009
Very good. I kind of want her to end up with perry's brother, though
M M chapter 7 . 1/25/2009
Well, I guess the guilt didn't override the attraction to Jorma did it? LOL! How convenient that Dorian planned a trip for the exact same time. I'm sure that Perry will read something into that. If Ant falls for both of them, things could get really sticky, but it will be fun to read.
Lost and No One Cares chapter 7 . 1/25/2009

Another Dorian's point of view (please).

Always makes things interesting :)
mipster chapter 6 . 1/25/2009
I think that the dialogue was necessary to the plot of the story so I am not upset by the lack of "action". It shows a shift in their relationship :) I enjoyed this chapter and can't wait for the next one!

M M chapter 6 . 1/24/2009
Guilt and jealousy? Will Dorian run interference when Jorma shows up? Will this growing attraction ruin what Ant feels for Jorma? Next chapter should be interesting.
sayitstrue chapter 6 . 1/24/2009
I took a break from studying for Math midterms just to check if there was anything new on fictionpress, and your update was such an awesome surprise. Any chance you'll gift us with another chapter tomorrow? :D It'll make my day. Hehe. Anyway, I didn't mind that this chapter was dialogue heavy because it was really helpful in getting both characters more. But I have to admit, I really liked the mini-action when Jorma's text came in, with the jealousy brewing and all. Keep up the great work! (:
Lost and No One Cares chapter 6 . 1/24/2009
Yup. Still like it. lol.

But why not Dorian's view when she gets the text from Jorma? That's what I really want to know.

That had better be in the next chapter.
Renee Spelt Strange chapter 6 . 1/24/2009
I think you're being a little too harsh on yourself there. I like the dialogue - it isn't stilted or awkward and Dorian's cynical idealism (if that makes sense) is charming. One question though. How do you pronounce Jorma?
Jevanminx chapter 6 . 1/24/2009
It was definitely interesting, the conversations that the two hold bring light to thinks about both Dorian and Ant.

mipster chapter 5 . 1/23/2009
Hey :) Just read the first five chapters of your story. I am really liking it so far. The characters are interesting. The plot is moving at a believable rate. Their interactions are funny. And most of all I CAN"T WAIT to read more! I hope you update soon

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