Oh, please, continue in 3rd person. This is so not a 1st person story. You need a little distance because these guys are both kind of jerky.

I definitely like how this has started out! :) If you do 1st person you should do Ray's POV.

Is Tracy Ray's housekeeper?

Ray seems to have a good heart, to bad he had to spend a night in jail.

very interesting story! keep up the good work, and i look forward to more!

plus, i like it in 3rd POV

yes, i liked it and i am looking forward to more! I like third person myself.

Peace, Love, Laughter~

Lost~~