Reviews for Cast Out
plumblossom chapter 2 . 5/3/2009
Oh, please, continue in 3rd person. This is so not a 1st person story. You need a little distance because these guys are both kind of jerky.
Poptart Guava King chapter 2 . 4/22/2009
I definitely like how this has started out! :) If you do 1st person you should do Ray's POV.
Lerene chapter 2 . 2/28/2009
Is Tracy Ray's housekeeper?
Lerene chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
Ray seems to have a good heart, to bad he had to spend a night in jail.
JtheChosen1 chapter 2 . 2/2/2009
very interesting story! keep up the good work, and i look forward to more!

plus, i like it in 3rd POV
Lost In The Ever After chapter 2 . 2/1/2009
yes, i liked it and i am looking forward to more! I like third person myself.

Peace, Love, Laughter~