Reviews for An Illusion of the Heart
ahcheww chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
I love your story! its the first time I've ever reviewed . hehes (: do update! sorry that i couldnt give a 'well rounded critique' because I don't know how to give one. anyway, do update ASAP! I'll be waiting D
violinlover96 chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
It was wonderful! So now I guess I know your name is Phoebe! Update ASAP!

Lots of luv,

concerto49 chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
You have a creative mind for twisting some plain concepts and spinning it in an interesting way... and that's what counts for first person. The only thing is - it's probably a bit light on description - and you can give the environment, people and whatever else more life.
i-will-kill-you-pixie chapter 2 . 3/1/2009
this is a really good story, from just reading these first two chapter i think it will b great, cant wait to see what comes along next ]

Nacreous Neomania chapter 2 . 1/26/2009
omg that was so sad!

please continue!
greensmiles chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
All i honestly have to say is WHOA! i didn't expect that at all! Her father is crazy, asylum needed immediately. Good chapter, might i mention a tad scary? LOLS Update soon.
Serafina Claremond chapter 2 . 1/24/2009

...this was a pretty pointless review.
Serafina Claremond chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
Nice, beautiful.

hehehehe...bananas, chickens, AND ellington?

talk to you later phoebe.

with love,


p.s. love the story!
greensmiles chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
great start, update soon
Nacreous Neomania chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
plz continue :) this is really good xx