Reviews for Janelle Luisa Rodrigo Velasquez
Navaura chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
The contents of her book collection in order of arrangements are: (That part could've been left out). It's interesting to see how you went from third person to second person in the second paragraph of this essay. It's beautifully written too. Alot of vocab, really nice. Easy read and your punctuation is phenomenal! I'm loving it. I could imagine you going through every single thing written in here. Astounding, if I may say so myself!

Beautiful. Let me know if you ever decide to write a novel. I would love reading it.