|Reviews for Harlan's Mansion|
| nat.bookworm chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Oh, this is really good! You've got a very distinctive writing style that really draws the reader in, and all your speech sounds really realistic. I know that's a problem that some writers have, that their characters don't talk like people actually talk, but you don't have that issue at all. Your descriptions are clear and easy to follow, and you paint the scenes remarkably well. I feel like I'm in the story. I can imagine everything. I really like it! :)
| Faded-Whisper chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
I just re-read it again after a whole year! (I think :\)
It's still as tragic and beautiful as it was then and I love it.
One thing, though, can you change its status to COMPLETE cuz I opened it up hopefully like...Maybe there's more... maybeeeee :p
| Sliverofsun chapter 13 . 10/4/2012
Well, I knew it going in what I was getting myself into. I shouldn't have read the reviews before the amazing story. Lesson learned. It was quite marvelous, and I feel you truly expanded on the main characters' personalities, which made them both extremely attractive. In truth I was made to wonder what I would do when placed in the situation Cole had been thrust into. I am certain doubt would overcome my mind-death would have been a respite were I not such a coward-so maybe a short-lived insanty may overtake me. You did a tremendous job of depicting his turmoil. I just wish it would have lasted longer for the sake of getting to know him more. :)
| AJ 96 chapter 13 . 3/25/2012
OMG! I love this story. It's so sad! I swear I'm crying right now. I wish that Harlan and Alicia had more time together. I wish they had a happy ending and he didn't die. God, I wish he found out that he didn't do anything to Holly and she got what she deserves. God, I wish for a lot of things, but AMAZING story!
| Damned to heaven chapter 13 . 3/2/2012
I've reviewed this before, but I thought I'd just let you know that this is one of those select few stories I come back to. To read over and over again. I just wished they had a little more time. Holly was a bitch, she may have been through hell but that sure as hell didnt give her the right to make Harlan's life hell. Bless blondie. I absolutely adore this story. Thanks for writing it and all.
| Aly chapter 13 . 1/6/2012
Oh my gosh! This was certainly original- by that, I mean I loved it!
I was a little shocked about how Harlan and Alicia got together, but I was glad too. I couldn't believe Alicia had the courage to go into his room. At night. And, later, to get in his bed!
Anyway, at the end, I nearly started crying. It was so sad that Harlan was actually innocent, and that he and Alicia couldn't stay together.
This is one of my favorite stories ever! You're an amazing writer!
| haliad chapter 13 . 12/6/2011
Just got through reading this one, and I am impressed! It ended on a very sad note, I actually found myself tearing up at the end. Harlan/Cole's life was such a tragedy.
Anyway, this was a very interesting premise and you wrote it pretty believably. If I were to fall in love with a kidnapper this how I would want it :P
| veronica leigh chapter 13 . 11/3/2011
Oh my goshhhh. I read this entire thing just today and I swear, I'm about to cry. It took me a minute to get the whole HarlanCole and HarlanCallum thing, but I still love it. All of it. Oh my God, I just wish he could have lived and they could have escaped together, and maybe now they'd be sitting in a little cafe in Sydney, sipping tea and trying to figure out who was trying to take them into custody...Can I just have my own little ending in my mind that they were happy together at the end?
| Faded-Whisper chapter 13 . 10/17/2011
Look, you have to change it somehow... He should die knowing that she loves him at the VERY LEAST! He thinks she betrayed him - that's horrible. I'm sorry, but it's not faiirrr...
And I know life isn't fair but still... you need to alter it a bit pleeeasee... for the sake of the smiles of your readers and fans...
| Guest chapter 13 . 10/14/2011
Well when I first started reading it, I realised I had read it before ages ago and at first I though someone had plagurised it! Then I realised that you have just changed it and made it so much more awesome xD! Really I absolutely loved this story. The end is really sad but sweet at the same time :). Nice work!
| gulistanlik chapter 13 . 10/14/2011
Crying again. It's not fair. It's really not fair. I know life isn't all smiles and rainbows but dammit he didn't deserve this. And he died thinking Alicia had turned on him. (
There are another 6 chapters to go?
| Quinette chapter 13 . 10/13/2011
Oh my God you actually killed Harlan.
I'm like . . . heartbroken right now.
Alternate ending, por favor?
Death notwithstanding, it was a lovely story that wasn't too dark for my perky, cotton candy tastes :) I enjoyed reading it.
| long lost and still lovely chapter 13 . 10/13/2011
*sniffle* *SNIFF* *blow out into a full fledged sob* NOOO WAHH HE DIEDDDDD NOOOOOOO but omg his diary enteries were nice! but man i didnt expect her to do that! or for it to turn out that holly's brother did that to her! but who was holly bro? u didnt introduce him right? i think it was ben but ben's the friend oh well i plan to reread this whole thing again so i'll know soon lol but still this was nice! can u update ur other stories too? .
| Anehalia chapter 13 . 10/13/2011
OMG! She kills him!What the hell! Why? Ach! I don't like this ending. Couldn't she at least also die and join him or something? Why did she do that! Why did she threaten to kill him, and why did they go to town instead of running?
| TwiggyBird chapter 12 . 10/12/2011
"Will we need money?"
"Of course," Harlan replied. "How much can you fit in your bra?"
lolol i love them together :)