Reviews for One of the Boys |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have a bone to pick with you missy. 4 years! Four straight years and you haven't updated this story. And on top of that it has 400 reviews! That is quite unbelievable. humph! -WhoSaidWhatNow(i'm here too :D) |
![]() ![]() ![]() good |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting |
![]() ![]() NO!HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?YOU WERE MY FAVORITE ALMOST-KINDA-SORTA-AUTHOR! |
![]() ![]() Haha seems the waitress won't be getting any tonight! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really interesting and fun! I would love to read more and let it get more complicated and playful :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I repeat please I beg you not to start something you cant finish, thanks. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Contradiction: In chapter 5, you had Dalton cover Charlie with hid heated blanket. You also said that he plugged it into the wall. This chapter, they were out of electricity, so how did they use the blanket? Great story! |
![]() ![]() ohkay at the end of chapter ten i was like: "you just did something extremly awesome." and yeah... that sort of sums up my hyper-giggling-laughing-squealing joyride through your fic. youre abandoning it? : meanie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Come back! Im having withdrawal symptoms from your story! U gotta update :((( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shouldn't it be a crime leaving the readers on the line? :( huhuhu. I loved this story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg!CANT BELEIVE that ur abandoning this awesome story "sniff sniff" i can see how much u luv ur fans jks lol great story though...not...thx for updating nd if u hav time plz finish the story thx xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() no update in 3 yrs plz do it now.,! i |
![]() ![]() nonono:(! Please finish One Of The Boys...I like it lots! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i know ur buissy w/ other stories but please update and try to finish thisone! |