Reviews for Baggage
Mirabella chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Well written, and i like the topic. I wasnt expecting it to end lik that and it surprised me, which is always good. :)
Narq chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
this is soo good! you kept the real image out of the reader until the really end, the punch line! and you just banged it down, the impact was amazing!
AStrangerToYou chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
Wow, I like it. It's a good idea to describe that other scene, before you describe the part about the baby. The ending might be even more shocking if you didn't mention it in the summary. But seriously, wow. Well done. ;D