|Reviews for Sixteen Months|
| maxwell's other demon chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
interesting. and with a lot of emotion.
| Samurai-Soldier chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
Very lovely and heartfelt. Regardless of this is true or not, it says to me "This is a real family", which can be pretty hard if it is just a poem. Nonetheless, simple, but powerful. it was very poetic in how it was delivered, and overall a smashing job! Should this be true, I hope father comes home safe, Peace