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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this. Short and sweet. You described things well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, twisted but inventive. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting, I like it. I think its of to a good start, but it needs some more development, but theres areas where Im left confused. First off, who is the antagonist? The killer, or the victim? That needs to be clarified. Id also like to see a reason for why the character suddenly lashes out, we see a shift in behavior, concentrating primarily on the exertion of force and the lack of pain they feel despite injuries. But we dont see a change in the mental state of the character. They seem to remain happy at the death of the other. I also wonder why they dont care about god anymore? There should be a little explanation as to why, otherwise its more just words for the sake of hearing them said. Good Job, Keep er Up ) |