Reviews for Loyalty
NormaJean Beausoleil chapter 2 . 11/17/2011
great job! it all feels a little rushed, like it could be expanded to something much larger, but the characters are intriguing and pleasant. and the mysterious plots are fantastically entertaining. thanks for sharing!
Sanguineus chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
So cute. I love it. that a nosebleed coming. Never had one before...
Shikokudarkstar chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
I love it. It was a little bit much at once; I would have liked it to have been split into two chapters so it doesn't seem so monsterous in size, but that's just my opinion. XD But I loved your story. It was great along with your characters. I hope to read more of your writing again sometime soon. XD

SweetPseudonym chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
The perfect fairytale ending for the perfect fairytale! What an amazingly romantic and heroic story-I really enjoyed reading it! It painted such a beautiful picture in my head. I'm a little sad that it's a oneshot, but I think it was a perfect story for the length it had. Looking forward to more!