| Reviews for Male Maiden |
|---|
   Racer283 chapter 10 . 8/9/2009 Pretty good chapter, can't wait to read more of it |
| lenaleelover13 chapter 10 . 8/1/2009 i heart ur story! update soon and i will LIVE! AND SURVIVE! AND EAT! AND BLOSSOM! (i think im gunna stop now) |
| klaudiviris chapter 9 . 7/20/2009 awesome chapter. Just got back from work. My brain's not as eloquent as it should be. Hope there's more soon, thanks for the fun so far! |
| SapphireIris chapter 9 . 7/19/2009 Aha, wow. That probably will take the cake for Weirdest First Kiss. I haven't spotted any major errors, and so far I'm getting into the story. I'd like for you to continue. ;D |
| lenaleelover13 chapter 9 . 7/19/2009 wow u had me laughin so hard when they rescued rachel! lol! keep up da good work and update soon! |
| lenaleelover13 chapter 8 . 7/19/2009 ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! i love Mitate! she's so physco... like me! if i were her, i would be telling my life's story to a squirrel too... now onto chapter 9! |
| ForgottenTales chapter 9 . 7/18/2009 LOL.. She kissed him(or should I say her?)? OMG, that was hilarious! hmm.. does she(Rachel) play a significant part in the story or was it just a fling? |
| Mehhh chapter 6 . 7/1/2009 LOL! This story is SOO funny! Keep up the good work! :D |
| lenaleelover13 chapter 7 . 6/17/2009 wow im so happy u decided 2 update! i missed u so much! -hugs- anyway, im sorry if u think im annoying, but i dont care bcuz ur so amazing! also, i think ur theme music (the 1st time) should be barney. im just weird like that so dont be hatin'! :) |
| Helizabeth chapter 6 . 5/24/2009 haha. it's funy. i like Miate. |
| klaudiviris chapter 6 . 5/16/2009 booby shots are only painful when they're growing, I think. At this stage in life everything just sort of bounces off... but I remember the agonizing pain of putting on a t-shirt when I was 14... and that one time I got hit just there while playing soccer, oh dear... Anyhow, still enjoying the story! No constructive criticism since my mind is like melted cheese after work and prior to an exam. Keep up the good work! |
| lenaleelover13 chapter 6 . 5/15/2009 aw... that was the last story! dang it bcuz THEY WERE SO GOOD! i DO feel void's pain... no, really, i do... |
| lenaleelover13 chapter 5 . 5/15/2009 wow. this might be kinda late, but glad your finals are over! i hope you DO have some more time to write. you are a GREAT author. just so you know, i have a story on this website, too! it's called "elements", and you should look at it sometime! :) |
| lenaleelover13 chapter 4 . 5/15/2009 awesome! kind of pointless, this one was, but amazing all the same. KEEP USING YOUR IMAGINATION even though you are a *coughcoughhackprocrastinator* |
| lenaleelover13 chapter 3 . 5/15/2009 cool... so, you ynmmaybe have an idea? (well, i can see you have more chapters already, but...)and, that last part actually wasnt very sick at all. i wouldnt have thought so if you never told all readers about it already. keep writin' :) |