Reviews for Wind I
Punslinger chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
Your economic use of words to subordinate perception of natural laws to poetic enchantment is stunning - except for the last line.

I can't forget that the moon is an airless globe receiving light and life from the sun, not the other way around.

Maybe I'm a male chauvinist, but I feel that the mood would be more compelling with a softer, more feminine moon drawing her romantic alure from the sun's masculine power.