Reviews for Dreaming of Demons
Alice The Walker chapter 15 . 3/27/2009
before I forget, one mistake I saw. when they're arguing about the whole jumping out of the car thing, seth says " why the fuck should is stop?" instead of "why the fuck should I stop?" now moving on

I loved the whole Jay interaction with Greggy sounded like something I would say. that and the whole forget friends name thing. I tend to blank out on those in the middle of conversations...gotta love Jay.

Another thing, I don't think i've mentioned this before, I might have, who knows...well, you could check the history if you really wanted too of all my reviews but whatever. oh, yeah, I love your writing style. It makes it that much funnier so good luck with the next chapter, thanks for the update, and talk to ya, or write to you same dif, next time you update
villainousVirgilious chapter 15 . 3/27/2009
Zomg! Run Jay run ya crazy bastard! (laughs)
Alice The Walker chapter 14 . 3/23/2009
glad to help, and i'm hoping your intentional mistake in this chapter was not a plot mess up or anything. Cause i'm a little to oblivious to see those kind of things. though if it's just normal accidents, I think I found two.

the first I saw was when they were getting in the car there was one quote of Jay's where he said "No, I was not going to put in the truck." I think there should be an it there, as a pronoun for the bag. and the second was when they were discussing Seth's eating habits and cannibals, there was "I Ido/I love meat."

question though! what did Seth mutter to himself after the mate comment? I'm dying to know, well not literally cause then i wouldn't be writing, but I think you get what I mean.

and in Modern Lit. class today, my teacher described Sigmuend Freud's "stream of conciousness" and the first thing that came into my head was Jay

Thank you thank you thank you for the very fast update. I'm glad your muse or whatever inspires you is letting you write so fast. Can't wait for the next update, so good luck writing I think this is my longest review! wow, well I love the story so whatever hope this isn't boring you
villainousVirgilious chapter 14 . 3/23/2009
LOL, Nobe. Jay is so funny.
Alice The Walker chapter 13 . 3/22/2009
er, one mistake. when you had Seth asking Jay to open the bathroom door, you said Jay got up and closed it, then saw Seth outside the bathroom. okay, now that the bad news is outta the way, I must say that I agree with Jay. It'd be kinda intresting to learn what dreams he was having last night Poor kids. I laugh at their problems. that was a really fast update though, so good for you. or at least I think it was fast. my sense of time's a bit loopy lately, too much work, and homework. ugh, well hoping your ideas keep coming, and good luck writing the next chapter
Midnights Scream chapter 5 . 3/22/2009
this is such a strange story, but I'm interested enough to keep reading.
Alice The Walker chapter 12 . 3/21/2009
...i've decided, it's poor Seth. Jay's enjoying this whole thing too much and i'm thinking that Blue thinks he has more than OCD. just my thoughts though. good luck with the next chapter
Alice The Walker chapter 11 . 3/19/2009
Poor, poor Seth. though I suppose I should also say poor, poor Jay if i'm any good at picking up on foreshadowing. the whole seth very happy to agree to deal, makes me a little suspicious. Though it's fun to wait for your updates adieu, hasta luego, and later.
Lerene chapter 11 . 3/19/2009
another great coveration with Blue _

Great chapter
Lerene chapter 10 . 3/19/2009
"Are you a succubus?" LOL Greatness!
deformed beauty chapter 10 . 3/19/2009
omygahd! lol, this is freaking funny xD

villainousVirgilious chapter 10 . 3/18/2009
(laughs hysterically) I love that! They NEED to get it on now! LOL! Poor Jay's gonna rupture an organ if that keeps going!
Alice The Walker chapter 10 . 3/18/2009
you're cruel. very, very, very cruel. While I loved the last line, it's a cliff hanger. MAJOR! but finally, Seth is getting somewhere Can't wait to see Jay-chans reaction, so good luck writing the next chapter, and update soon please
Lerene chapter 9 . 3/17/2009
I loved this chapter! It was very funny. I love your demon idea. And Jay! LOL. his thought are just out there. But I love it because it funny and random. Some thoughts are a bit over the top, but it's still good.
Alice The Walker chapter 9 . 3/15/2009
hehe, seth's a bit slow isn't he. I mean really, he should of just taken his shirt off right away he'd have jay's attention and prove it. *sigh* he needs to hurry up and kiss jay. gosh, can seth get any more dense. ah well, thank you once again for the very fast update, I will once again say that I adore/love jay, and good luck writing the next chapter
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