Zomg! Run Jay run ya crazy bastard! (laughs)

glad to help, and i'm hoping your intentional mistake in this chapter was not a plot mess up or anything. Cause i'm a little to oblivious to see those kind of things. though if it's just normal accidents, I think I found two.

the first I saw was when they were getting in the car there was one quote of Jay's where he said "No, I was not going to put in the truck." I think there should be an it there, as a pronoun for the bag. and the second was when they were discussing Seth's eating habits and cannibals, there was "I Ido/I love meat."

question though! what did Seth mutter to himself after the mate comment? I'm dying to know, well not literally cause then i wouldn't be writing, but I think you get what I mean.

and in Modern Lit. class today, my teacher described Sigmuend Freud's "stream of conciousness" and the first thing that came into my head was Jay

Thank you thank you thank you for the very fast update. I'm glad your muse or whatever inspires you is letting you write so fast. Can't wait for the next update, so good luck writing I think this is my longest review! wow, well I love the story so whatever hope this isn't boring you

LOL, Nobe. Jay is so funny.

er, one mistake. when you had Seth asking Jay to open the bathroom door, you said Jay got up and closed it, then saw Seth outside the bathroom. okay, now that the bad news is outta the way, I must say that I agree with Jay. It'd be kinda intresting to learn what dreams he was having last night Poor kids. I laugh at their problems. that was a really fast update though, so good for you. or at least I think it was fast. my sense of time's a bit loopy lately, too much work, and homework. ugh, well hoping your ideas keep coming, and good luck writing the next chapter

this is such a strange story, but I'm interested enough to keep reading.

...i've decided, it's poor Seth. Jay's enjoying this whole thing too much and i'm thinking that Blue thinks he has more than OCD. just my thoughts though. good luck with the next chapter

Poor, poor Seth. though I suppose I should also say poor, poor Jay if i'm any good at picking up on foreshadowing. the whole seth very happy to agree to deal, makes me a little suspicious. Though it's fun to wait for your updates adieu, hasta luego, and later.

another great coveration with Blue _

Great chapter

"Are you a succubus?" LOL Greatness!

omygahd! lol, this is freaking funny xD

update

(laughs hysterically) I love that! They NEED to get it on now! LOL! Poor Jay's gonna rupture an organ if that keeps going!

you're cruel. very, very, very cruel. While I loved the last line, it's a cliff hanger. MAJOR! but finally, Seth is getting somewhere Can't wait to see Jay-chans reaction, so good luck writing the next chapter, and update soon please

I loved this chapter! It was very funny. I love your demon idea. And Jay! LOL. his thought are just out there. But I love it because it funny and random. Some thoughts are a bit over the top, but it's still good.

hehe, seth's a bit slow isn't he. I mean really, he should of just taken his shirt off right away he'd have jay's attention and prove it. *sigh* he needs to hurry up and kiss jay. gosh, can seth get any more dense. ah well, thank you once again for the very fast update, I will once again say that I adore/love jay, and good luck writing the next chapter

My little sister always calls things gihugic. It's pretty cute considering she's nine. I love this and I really hope you keep it up.