Reviews for The great sky race
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
lol. this reminds me of Shel Silverstien. it's very sweet.
rhymemaker chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
Very cute. I like simple smiley poems like this. Good job.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
nice rhymes and rhythm.

one of the cutest things i've read in a while.

my only suggestion is that in the line "It went very fast", you substitute "went" for a more interesting verb, like perhaps "sailed".

nice work.
allreally chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
Cool idea! Just thought I'd stop by..

Thanks for your comment!