|Reviews for The great sky race|
| East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
lol. this reminds me of Shel Silverstien. it's very sweet.
| rhymemaker chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
Very cute. I like simple smiley poems like this. Good job.
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
nice rhymes and rhythm.
one of the cutest things i've read in a while.
my only suggestion is that in the line "It went very fast", you substitute "went" for a more interesting verb, like perhaps "sailed".
| allreally chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
Cool idea! Just thought I'd stop by..
Thanks for your comment!