|Reviews for afterhours|
| NearlyPrescient chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
you really nailed an artistic depiction of sex lacking smut.
I very much liked the structure of the piece, and the third part in particular. excellent tense usage, it really helped to shape the characters.
I'm assuming these characters are the same as from the other oneshot, where he's playing piano and she visits him?
it really feels like them.