Reviews for Quartetto |
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![]() ![]() :( just remembered it and had to go to google to find it. This is sad. Please publish it! |
![]() ![]() I'm sad that I probably will never get the chance to read this story . And after reading all the good reviews too... Well hopefully you haven't completely forgotten about this story and do post it up again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() God I hope you still write more stories! these few chapters will pull in anyone... stupid thieves sigh..shocked that I havent found this story before...i give you full points if I was really breathtakingly sweet and dramatic and wonderful lol and that was just the first few chapters that you still have up. Hope we get to see more work from you in the future :) Sincerely a true and hopeful fan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god you removed it... I loved this book. True it was long, but it is one of the best works on this site, at least in the genre. The relationships are intense, are crazy at times, and there is never a dull moment; but you know all that already. I would reread this book once a year at least, and I almost never reread anything. I know I'm just a stranger but if you wouldn't mind obliging, please publish this somewhere, like on Amazon. I wouldn't mind paying money for this, but realizing that it was gone was just depressing. Good luck with your other works :) |
![]() ![]() This is sad... I was looking for it to read it again and I couldn't find it... it's because it was too low in word count. I hope one day you'll be able to comfortably put it up again. People suck for being such scum. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. I'm so disappointed. I was starting on third time of reading the story. *sigh* damn |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very sad to see that you've taken down most of this story. I really enjoyed it the first time I read it and was coming back to read it again and found you've taken most of it down. I'm really disappointed. Hope you put it back up some day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow so many chapters and sooo long! lol but i loved it every step of the way! I just love Johann! You are a brilliant writer for sure! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story! And the end is so cute! Thanks for writing it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the characters so far in this, but I do have one suggestion, if you're ever revising it. It's much easier on the eyes if you use italics instead of bold for emphasis, because with bold it draws your eye to the word when you're not quite there yet, being so much darker than everything else, so that the reader ends up skipping around a little. Like the story so far, too! Wonder what's up with Michelle. Something tells me something's not right XD |
![]() ![]() A guy refusing a blow job? ha! the rest was pretty realistic I guess XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for all your Faves and Reviews! Unfortunately, I am planning on deleting most of the chapters I have posted since one of my friends had her story stolen and published by a thief by the name of "Emily Wilcox". Please let me know if you haven't finished reading this and would like to - I can e-mail you a PDF file of the entire manuscript. -Thea Nishimori (SeveRemus at AOL dot com) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dear Wyndslash, Thank you for undertaking the enormous task of reading this as well as reviewing! It does get better, I promise, but it has to get a little worse first. But when everything comes to light, it will be okay. It just occurred to me last night that Bernard should have been calling Johann on his cell all the time. When I re-write this story for publication, I'll have to add that in. If anybody has other suggestions for improvement, please let me know! Thea |
![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying this story right now, but I'm having a hard time going through these past few chapters. I'm not very comfortable with cheating, especially since Michelle is pregnant, and frankly, I would not want something like this to happen to me IRL. That said, I'm hoping it gets better soon, for everyone :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...what an epic story I'm so lad I made the effort to read his all the way through. Your characters are well developed and I love how they changed as time went by. There were enough disasters to make the story real, but not so many that the story was unrealistic. Congratulations on creating this amazing novel, I say novel cause that must be what this is! Lots of love from me for this story XD |