Reviews for Quartetto
Blueyes57 chapter 266 . 4/14/2012
Epic tale! Love it. Please update soon! Thanks for sharing your talent. I'm adding this to my faves.
Mama hub chapter 266 . 1/31/2012
Wow. Simply amazing. A Magnum Opus. Very well done. I love all of your characters and the very realistic story arc. And Brian and serafim are super hot. ;)
lunasea chapter 266 . 1/14/2012
So I'm not gonna lie j started reading this story awhile ago when I was just starting to read mxm stories and I never finished it. So this past 3 weeks I've reread it all and finally finished if. It was amazing and you are amazing and oh gosh yeah haha. I think it'd be awesome to read one from lucs pov just to know what their relationship was like before Quartetto and how everything played out but I'm not gunna ask ya for that. Anywho! Greatttt story doll, absolutely brilliant! Much love.
TheSupremeVigilance chapter 5 . 9/6/2011
Well, let me just say, SeveRemus, that I stalked you. Through the internet domain. And into this wonderful little world of trinkets and baubles and tchotchkes...

And anywho, I simply must tell you how much I anticipate your "epic." It is epic. I'm looking at the space ahead (over 200 chapters) and at the same time feel it insuperable and infinitesimal. So yeah.

I reviewed the anticipatory umbra that surrounds your name.

Hope I don't sound too creepy. :)

Just telling you that I live (no, not live, I'm not that psychopathic)...for things such as this.

By the by...Johann looks like Robert Mapplethorpe in my strange little Borges' Babelian book.
diwu6398 chapter 184 . 8/30/2011
I joined him and casually place an arm around his waist.

I think you meant "placed?"
diwu6398 chapter 171 . 8/30/2011
I noticed that a lot of what Brian and Johann/Serafim say to each other is punctuated with an exclamation mark. Of course, it's cute and it makes them happy, but... I think it might be a little excessive.

Also... some of your metaphors during the smut are a little... strange.

diwu6398 chapter 130 . 8/26/2011
Typo- "but you know that if she were alive to day"

I had this really weird dream last night that I was reading this story, and I found a typo, and I submitted a review to point it out. At least, I think it was a dream...
diwu6398 chapter 75 . 8/24/2011
Review for Chapter 79-

Luc says, "And just because I live in London doesn't mean I like English food!"

I'm confused?
diwu6398 chapter 57 . 8/24/2011
Hey! I just wanted to let you know that you don't have to rewrite this whole story- it's already fantastic! There are a few mistakes that I noticed, but compared to my writing, this is perfect.

I noticed that a lot of the time, Brian is "making" Johann do something. Like "making" him sit on the toilet while drying him off and stuff. It makes it sound like Brian is in control of Johann, though not as much as Bernard. I know you don't mean it that way, but if you do rewrite this, that might be something to consider.

And then something completely random. I remember somewhere in this story, "cazzo" the Italian word for f*** is mentioned. Ironically, there is a porn site called "Cazzo Club."
diwu6398 chapter 43 . 8/23/2011
Okay, this review is actually for Chapter 44, but I had already reviewed it. I noticed that Brian and Johann/Serafim hadn't even THOUGHT about protection. Of course, neither of them had had sex in the last five(?) months, and they trust each other very much... but I would think they would still think about condoms. Hm... And they never discussed STDs or anything beforehand...

But still! I love this story :) This is my second time reading this. I hope to finish by the time school starts.
MasterTLA chapter 20 . 7/26/2011
I'm on 20! This is my bookmark! lol :D
Aurabliss chapter 266 . 7/10/2011
I simply love the whole story! I can read it over and over and not get tired of it (with over 200 chapters, i'm getting spoilt for choice). I like the way how you incorporate all the elements into your story, like a beautiful piece of music! I'll have to set my standards even higher between best stories and better stories now. I don't get this happy in fanfic, very few authors make me feel happy after i've finished their story. Well done and continue to write more!
LateNightTurtle chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Holy crap! When I saw this story had 266 chapters, I was like 'WHOA!' Even my cat hissed at the computer! xD
hexyz chapter 3 . 1/28/2011
I usually roll my eyes whenever people rant about cheesy things like Brian did, but I didn't there. Whether or not that is because I agreed with him or because it was so cheesy that just ignored him isn't clear yet. It would be nice though if some artists did think that about their music.

Also, it is always nice when an author writes something and I recognize where it came from. The Hamlet quote in this chapter, the Of Mice and Men quote in the other story, and even the little blurb about Achmed. I'm not really sure why I wanted to tell you. Let's hope I can recognize some more.
ellierawr chapter 266 . 1/26/2011
nya i can't believe i finished it... it was amazing
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