Reviews for HalfBreed: Book One
Alex J. Carter chapter 11 . 10/22/2013
I just love Kaleb. He is perfectly humanly a vampire. (That makes sense if you think about it)
Alex J. Carter chapter 10 . 10/22/2013
She is either completely clueless or completely in denial.
Alex J. Carter chapter 9 . 10/22/2013
I don't believe I can remember anything else about this story, yet I am pretty sure I read the first or second draft. We shall see if I can predict anything.

P.S. Message me. I got FPSSA back up and running.
Alex J. Carter chapter 8 . 10/22/2013
Okay, so I am read reading this story, don't remember where I left off all those years ago. But if you get this Swarlos, please message me.
AbbieLou chapter 13 . 4/12/2010
Yikes! Well, I still have my predictions although somehow i think I'm going to be terribly wrong. And did I miss something? What is her other ability? Hm... :)
AbbieLou chapter 6 . 4/12/2010
This is really good and I definitely have a few ideas about what is going on but who knows if they will be right! The knuckle cracking though! It drives me crazy when people do it in real life and I'm sad to say it's bothering me even reading about it. Oh well, I guess I'll have to get over it if I want to find out what's going to happen. :)
Blackers chapter 10 . 12/28/2009
im guessing that her dad was the vampir.
Blackers chapter 9 . 12/28/2009
tehehe chuck norris. im liking alix more and more. i think niki needs to reavaluate her options. aw dude clifhangers suck eletric socets! [i pride myself on my silly fake-prfanities]
Blackers chapter 8 . 12/28/2009
ok. if this dude is gonna try to protect her, then he needs to work out a better watch schedual. le gasp im not a canible! i asure you [crosses fingers behind jk] but seriously technology hasnt advanced far enough for us to eat unupdating authers over the internet...yet. [jk]

dont worry- i havnt read/watched twilite [and i dont plan to] this story is ausoumly cool. the grammer and spelling dosnt make my head hert. and the auther [i forgot yours and your charactors names alredy- sorry] has an aousoum sense of humer [even if she thinks that i will eat her]
Ink-Stain'd chapter 13 . 11/9/2009
I read your entire story in about an hour or more because it's that addictive. Funny that you left us off at a cliffhanger! The story's just getting started and I can't wait for you to update. I hope you update soon, like really soon maybe tomorrow soon. But that's just wishful thinking. I like your story, a lot! This is one of my new favorites in fact. Well yeah, I hope you update soon.
AJ southern chapter 13 . 9/27/2009
Really enjoyable book so far. original theme has me very curious. Hope you update soon :) Congrats on winning all those awards
Mayuka chapter 12 . 9/10/2009
This story is very well-written; you have a talent at writing prose. I had a little bit of a problem with the storyline, though, which I'm sure you've heard multiple times before. The problem is that it is too much like Twilight.

The venom thing, crazy newborns, being in the forest all the time, Kaleb's ability to read people's minds except for Alex's... there are other things as well, but they are all just too reminiscent of Twilight. And I know it's not your fault that everyone just happens to have read it, so all vampire stories are going to look like you're copying to some extent (even though was certainly not the first vampire romance author like people tend to assume), but it's up to you to make it seem more original.

I liked that you added the telepathy on Alex's end, but it is still too much like Twilight, at least in my opinion. But like I said, you are a good author and I think you should keep writing what you enjoy. So don't mind me. :D
Faradei chapter 13 . 9/7/2009
Wow, awesome story. Can't wait for an update :) I love the fact that Alex has purple eyes.
Guest chapter 13 . 8/21/2009
wow this story is really good.. oh i saw that this story won a supernatural award or something.. congrats

really hope you update soon!
CaraJoAnn chapter 6 . 8/11/2009
okie dokie here goes- Lovin' the story so far, and absolutely adore the British accent. I was reading it out loud to myself, the closet I've ever come to being able to speak with an accent. I have no clue what Amelia is, but I'm gonna say that Fiona is some kind of slayer/hunter. I'm really interested in what Alex is...super strength, mind reading abilities, no need for medications, possible super sight, depending on how far away the tree was...she is an enigma not only to Kaleb, but also to me.
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