|Reviews for Don't forget to live|
| Fugitive-From-The-Future chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
I love the sense of repetition in this because its effective and gives the poem a chanting feel which is a fab idea. The last verse, where instead of useing 'for' you've used 'and' was a really good idea that i enjoyed because it gave a sense of the poem drawing to a close. The last 2 lines
'I fear for who i am
and for who i may not be.'
are really effective and i loved them because it sets the poem back to the title and gives the reader a parting finish to think about. :) great job, keep writing
| ariadne.masen chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
I started to cry. No joke. I can relate. I feel the same. Thanks for posting. Great poetry!