Reviews for The Howling Caves of Tresilian Bay
FictionistaKarla chapter 6 . 3/15/2010

FictionistaKarla chapter 5 . 3/15/2010
Beautiful imagery!

Roses and Erasmus.
FictionistaKarla chapter 4 . 3/15/2010

No! Epic win! hahahah

I can't wait to see the mockery.
FictionistaKarla chapter 3 . 3/15/2010
Erasmus Tripp.

interesting... why a ghost?
FictionistaKarla chapter 2 . 3/15/2010
What is this?

You definitely made me curious.

Love the wording.
FictionistaKarla chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
I want to know too. Intriguing.
eskimoxisses chapter 14 . 1/13/2010
Another good story.

Your chapters are rather short,

but well-written.

I noticed something that you did similarly in Isis,

you made Percy and Erasmus 'giggle'! men giggle; i assumed they chuckled!

anyways, thanks for bringing this to fictionpress :)
Ipaintwithwords chapter 3 . 8/21/2009
Hm...the plot thickens...Mr. Tripp could be quite a complication
Ipaintwithwords chapter 2 . 8/21/2009
Oh oh...

I love the description of Anne's sneaking around at night, the geography, lovely.

But you do know what they say about curiosity...
Ipaintwithwords chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
Hm...I can't help but wonder what this Edward is up to in the middle of the night...

Good beginning, glad I found this story
Le Cosmonaute chapter 14 . 7/9/2009
What a fascinating story! I read it all in a half hour, it was so absorbing. Very well-written, too. I love the mysterious ending and how your language really fit with the time period while staying fresh comfortable to read. Great work!
CrazyCowgirl101 chapter 14 . 7/7/2009
So sad! But i think i was expecting it :(( Great job, i really like what you have done. Your style for this piece was very good. This is one of my favorites.
CrazyCowgirl101 chapter 11 . 7/7/2009
Gah! Come back Erasmus! She loves you!
CrazyCowgirl101 chapter 5 . 7/7/2009
AH! I love how you don't stray from the correction diction of the time period! So many ppl do that an dit bugs me to no end. I like Erasmus, he's persistant, but seems a gentleman, though he it doesn't seem like he has a gentlemans intentions in mind. Good job. This is very addictiong ;) I also like YOUR choice of diction. You use words that are, or seem, to be common of the 1600s.
CrazyCowgirl101 chapter 3 . 7/7/2009
:O! Can't wait to read more. I like Mr. Tripp. Very interesting name, is it factual, or fictional?
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