Reviews for Defeated
DraganMir chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
Put a fork in that daemon, she's done! ; )

Great use of repetition, rhyme, and metaphor. Keep up the good work!

Persevering through the daily torment, and putting it down in a well written poem. Interesting...

You may want to win your battles on your own, but always remember that you aren't alone. Your friends and your heroes are more important than that talking speed bump in the road to freedom!