Reviews for The Violet and the Tom
e s h wa nn a chapter 1 . 10/15
fucking eshay n
ShwetaNandakumar chapter 11 . 9/21
Wow Ms Ocotillo.. Such beautiful penmanship. Amazing chapter
anmaree chapter 8 . 5/2
absolutley brilliant book cant seem to put it down i love the way the story ropes me into it
K chapter 25 . 4/20
This was so beautifully written. I must say I'm smitten with Nygell and his cuteness.
umm chapter 2 . 3/26
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4
this was written so well i admit i automatically get turned off by first person pov but you wrote in such a detailed way i was fine with it
yaboi chapter 1 . 11/29/2017
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanooot badnot bad

gremmerm chapter 7 . 10/11/2017
You ask about reader's responses to this chapter. Info-dump? grow bored? feel that author was 'feeding info'?

Answer: No. No. No.

As reader I enjoyed this chapter. it gave a picture of Sylvan and Karmin as relaxed and comfortably trusting in each other with Sylvan learning more about the man he desires.
ulalume chapter 1 . 7/3/2017
COMMENT FOR WHOLE STORY: maybe make it third person omniscient? i know that would be a lot of work to go back through but, I think it would help because you could use updated language at certain points that would make some things easier to understand/ not caught in the trap of being a forced lexicon. Also I feel like you could allow a totally more in-depth view of all the characters inner emotions/ true motivations. It could give the story a layer of character reliability that would put it on a new level. really loved it though, great story :) cheers
Sychronergy chapter 5 . 5/8/2017
When I read this for the first time, I think this chapter stood out to me a lot. Sylvan was, in an extremely gentle way, very dominant here - I think Nygell's trying to get away was almost adorable and I love how you leave this specific line "The day's reek arouses me, Master" on its own - I personally imagine him saying it almost like a reprimand. I think this was when I was -really sure that Sylvan is not some meek, infantile slave boy.
Sychronergy chapter 3 . 5/8/2017
So, it's pretty much long overdue that I review this even though I am not sure if you are even on this site anymore, haha xD

From the beginning, I liked Sylvan's voice. There was something about him that made me think this is not going to be like any other Master/Slave story. From the moment Sylvan was more interested in Nygell than vice versa, I thought there was going to be something unexpected to be revealed in this story :P The details are exquisite, the writing itself is artful and I like how you build everything up. I can read this story many times over and not feel bored. :)
Guest chapter 25 . 4/11/2017
I read this over the course of two days and LOVED every word of it! I feel like a thief for having read it for free. There's no way you couldn't get the published somewhere like Riptide Publishing. No way. This was excellent beyond words. Thank you for sharing!
Bloodedlife94 chapter 25 . 12/21/2016
Wow. Quite different from the usual master/slave stories but still just as exciting.
samekraemer chapter 25 . 9/12/2016 laundry didn't get done today because I go so caught up in this story. I apologize for not reviewing each chapter, but it was too compelling. Thank you for sharing it. I truly loved it, and I'm not usually one to prefer period stories. This, however, is now a favorite. SK
Katherine S chapter 1 . 7/19/2016
Hi! I just wanted to say I read the whole story and I am in love with it! It is a read I could read multiple times and I hope you write more like this in the future! 33 xoxo
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