|Reviews for The Violet and the Tom|
| e s h wa nn a chapter 1 . 10/15
fucking eshay n
| ShwetaNandakumar chapter 11 . 9/21
Wow Ms Ocotillo.. Such beautiful penmanship. Amazing chapter
| anmaree chapter 8 . 5/2
absolutley brilliant book cant seem to put it down i love the way the story ropes me into it
| K chapter 25 . 4/20
This was so beautifully written. I must say I'm smitten with Nygell and his cuteness.
| umm chapter 2 . 3/26
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/4
this was written so well i admit i automatically get turned off by first person pov but you wrote in such a detailed way i was fine with it
| yaboi chapter 1 . 11/29/2017
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanooot badnot bad
| gremmerm chapter 7 . 10/11/2017
You ask about reader's responses to this chapter. Info-dump? grow bored? feel that author was 'feeding info'?
Answer: No. No. No.
As reader I enjoyed this chapter. it gave a picture of Sylvan and Karmin as relaxed and comfortably trusting in each other with Sylvan learning more about the man he desires.
| ulalume chapter 1 . 7/3/2017
COMMENT FOR WHOLE STORY: maybe make it third person omniscient? i know that would be a lot of work to go back through but, I think it would help because you could use updated language at certain points that would make some things easier to understand/ not caught in the trap of being a forced lexicon. Also I feel like you could allow a totally more in-depth view of all the characters inner emotions/ true motivations. It could give the story a layer of character reliability that would put it on a new level. really loved it though, great story :) cheers
| Sychronergy chapter 5 . 5/8/2017
When I read this for the first time, I think this chapter stood out to me a lot. Sylvan was, in an extremely gentle way, very dominant here - I think Nygell's trying to get away was almost adorable and I love how you leave this specific line "The day's reek arouses me, Master" on its own - I personally imagine him saying it almost like a reprimand. I think this was when I was -really sure that Sylvan is not some meek, infantile slave boy.
| Sychronergy chapter 3 . 5/8/2017
So, it's pretty much long overdue that I review this even though I am not sure if you are even on this site anymore, haha xD
From the beginning, I liked Sylvan's voice. There was something about him that made me think this is not going to be like any other Master/Slave story. From the moment Sylvan was more interested in Nygell than vice versa, I thought there was going to be something unexpected to be revealed in this story :P The details are exquisite, the writing itself is artful and I like how you build everything up. I can read this story many times over and not feel bored. :)
| Guest chapter 25 . 4/11/2017
I read this over the course of two days and LOVED every word of it! I feel like a thief for having read it for free. There's no way you couldn't get the published somewhere like Riptide Publishing. No way. This was excellent beyond words. Thank you for sharing!
| Bloodedlife94 chapter 25 . 12/21/2016
Wow. Quite different from the usual master/slave stories but still just as exciting.
| samekraemer chapter 25 . 9/12/2016
DAmn...my laundry didn't get done today because I go so caught up in this story. I apologize for not reviewing each chapter, but it was too compelling. Thank you for sharing it. I truly loved it, and I'm not usually one to prefer period stories. This, however, is now a favorite. SK
| Katherine S chapter 1 . 7/19/2016
Hi! I just wanted to say I read the whole story and I am in love with it! It is a read I could read multiple times and I hope you write more like this in the future! 33 xoxo