Oh I want to know what the star and the circle is all about!

Uwwa~

The details are to graphic~~

Uwa~

This story is just like a korean drama, in the sense that the drama is constantly piling up...

Wow...

so much is going on and it's a little hard to keep up with it.

I always have to take a break and watch Yamada Taro Monogatari.(It's a light-hearted comedy drama)

Bad things are just constantly happening.

I think you should space them out and add some fluff, because continuous drama would just put strain on the reader's mind.

I know that I feel alot of strain.

All of the continuous drama is really overwhelming.

On the other side, I really like the plot.

Aw...

I feel bad for Graeme...

Wow. Noah is officially a psycho in my book. It's sad to know that the main character of my story is named Noa. It's a Japanese girl's name and is spelled withe characters "rare" and "love".

I also really liked the elevator line at the end. And it seems everyone is just get angry and emotional. I kind of find it a little overwhelming with all of the different emotions. A light-hearted event between Chris and Graeme would be nice after this...

I apologize if I seem to naggy(is that the right word?).

Uwa~

Interesting...I'm feeling suspicious of everyone and it's making me confused... I like it!

But,can you explain what happened to her eyes? I'm a little confused...

Though I think its because of my lack of knowledge of the English language.

Is it me or is Graeme a stalker?

D: Clarissa isn't very popular at the moment~

Nice way of incorporating that suspicion and tatoo in there. Ok so did the other two people drown in the river because Chris had frozen it?

thanks for the chapter! im glad she told him she loves him!

Hmm...Interesting...

But, Chris's pessimism is slightly annoying.

And how do you pronounce Graeme's name? What's its origin?

I'm not good with English and i don't know the pronounciations of some words.

Ah! I am dying to know how everything is gonna turn out!

yes! update! i love it. this chapter was so sad i can't wait to figure it all out!

Holy crab shacks! The last twon chapters were so intense and so good! I was left staring at my computer screan for a good five minutes before I could type this up! And the tatoos its like everyone's in on something, the conspiracy! I so cant even wait till the next update I'm still on the edge of my seat, update soon!

~Obsession

EEP! shirley was being a total meanie to chris [ i wonder what kyle has to do with ms royce though O_o update soon ! :D