OMG! I hope Clarissa and Graeme are ok...

absolutely love the story so far! please update soon :D

I am begging you with ALL MY HEART- UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Yay! Motivation! )

As you can see, I'm a new reader. And I think this story has a lot of potential (why would I be reviewing otherwise?). However, it seems a bit...shallow? I don't know how to explain it. I feel as though the plot and characters can be more intricate then they are now. PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE don't take that the wrong way, because I really like your story! I'm merely suggesting that it could be transformed from great to fabulous.

Regardless of that comment, you'll be seeing reviews from me in the future, I hope!

Ciao, I'm alerting this!

~WeirdButAwesome

update please

gee golly gosh, that was intense! i love the idea of having powers with your eyes, and that chris and graeme are opposites as well :)

love your style, keep it up!

Thanks for the chapter I love it, the story keeps getting better and better, keep up the good work and update soon please.

This chapter was awesome, I really liked the action part with the bridge, really got my heart going. :P Hope you can get more out soon!

Oh my god! Who would cause a catastrophe like that? I hope Graeme is alright!

(shocked into suspense)

Where's Graeme?

I'm so sure Rita had something to do with it.

ah! that was an unpredictable twist! and i am so anxious to read more! oh my gosh! please please please update soon!

yay you updated! please do it again, i'm freakin out here lol

cant waiit for next chapter! this story is unbelievably good, the description is wondeful C:

Thanks so much for the chapter!

Uh-oh, if she's feeling that strongly about it I'm afraid what's going to happen in the field trip.