|Reviews for To Sister|
| SakuraLoveXox chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
"I miss who you once were; I hate who you are now"
I feel this way a lot about friends, but then you have to realize that people change, and you have to let them xP
as for critique, you have a few grammar errors like "you're", when it's supposed to be "your".
overall, this is a very nice poem, it has a prominent tone of a concerned big sister, and i find it really sweet :)
| Samurai-Soldier chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
I liked it, very simple, strait forward, and powerful. It may not mean much to most, since they don't know you or your sister, but nonetheless, the poem itself is pretty good. You're in a rut huh? Try writing about stuff you don't normally, it may sound like that wouldn't work worth a crap, but if you do write something even a little good, even if its something you don't really agree with (Like for instance, I write alot of Anti-war poetry, but i'm not really for OR against it)then it really boosts confidence, and let my tell ya, confidence goes a LONG way in writing. So keep on keepin' on, Peace