|Reviews for Anna|
| Box CarZ chapter 3 . 2/9/2009
Wow, this keeps getting better and better!
| Box CarZ chapter 2 . 2/9/2009
This is soo good! I just keep reading and can't stop! Anna is awesome!
| Box CarZ chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
This is cool!
| Black Bride Anna chapter 4 . 2/8/2009
This was fantastic! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time! This chapter had a lot of nice Anna/Fredrich stuff in it, which makes me happy. Lol, I bet you think I'd a dorky fangirl or something. I'm just having fun!
Good luck next chapter!
*Your fan, Anna*
| Melissa Norvell chapter 4 . 2/8/2009
I swear, every time I read another chapter, Anna gets a little more insane. I enjoy it, considering the human psychology has always fascinated me.
I also like the morbid portion involving Fredrich. I keep liking him more and more. I certianly hope we can find out the intentions behind the hospital and what is exactly happening to everyone.
Lol, I think I'm glad I haven't had a knockwurst in a while. Nah, I'd probably eat it anyway, because I'm just like that.
Do update soon!
| Tsumujikaze no Soujutsu chapter 4 . 2/7/2009
Well, it seems that Anna is really going nuts now. Which leads to one thing I'm looking forward to see and that is her own future struggles for sanity. Surely that aspect of the plot has to be an issue since from my guess, you're planning this story to be more or less character-based. Anyway, wonder what will happen next with the potential bombing to be taken place. And yeah when I saw Anna's name in this story, my brain went straight to Tekken lol! :D Must be the fact that I'm too obsessed with the series especially Asuka. But then again, I'm also smitten by Aoko of the Melty Blood games and Morrigan of the Darkstalkers fame. ;)
| Black Bride Anna chapter 3 . 2/4/2009
I was on the edge of my seat! I'm so glad that Anna didn't kill Fredrich, especially because of how much he helped her...Well that and I like the two of them, lol. Great chapter! Keep up the awesome work!
| Melissa Norvell chapter 3 . 2/4/2009
Every time I read this I end up getting more and more involved. I was so caught up in this chapter that I nearly missed coming back to work! This is one of the best horror-based stories that I've read in a long time and I read a lot of stuff in that genre.
I thought Anna was going to kill Fredrich for a moment there but I'm glad that she didn't. I like his character. I definitely look forward to your next chapter.
| Tsumujikaze no Soujutsu chapter 3 . 2/1/2009
Herro there! Glad to see that you've updated. :) Anyway, interesting chapter here on Anna's insanity. I can say it's pretty much of a twisted justice in a certain sense of an eye for an eye kind here for the doctors. Just one thing to point out: Normally, a slash to the neck artery is enough to kill at least through blood loss. So I think it would be pointless for Anna to waste ammo on that. Also, it could be possible that a victim of fatal neck artery injuries will be incapacitated to the point of not even able to make a moderately loud sound. So this may be something you want to look into especially a slash in neck artery is enough for death within seconds or a couple of minutes at the very most. Apart from that, nothing to complain here except that I can see an interesting twist to the plot by the end of this chapter. Lynx blood in human body physical enhancement? Dude that so imba lol! :D
P.S: I think I'll stop here for now. Will review your other update asap. Just hope to see more of your reviews for my stories soon. In particular, hope to see your reviews for my latest story A Ranger's Tale soon. I'm pretty much on a high for this one, so yeah, hope to see your reviews for it soon! Bye! :)
| Black Bride Anna chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
This just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to see what happens next and what exactly this hospital is doing and what it's even about.
| Black Bride Anna chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
Well, I can't resist a story with my name on it. (as it suggests, my pen name has my real name in it) Anyway, this is a haunting and beautiful piece. I really like your writing style and I'll definitely read more of this!
| Melissa Norvell chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
I think I'm addicted to this story. I'm using my break time to finish up your new chapter. I hope you can update soon!
I really like Anna and Fredrich's relationship. I actually kind of like them as a possible couple if there will be any romance in this. I don't know, they click really well to me and Fredrich seems to really understand her.
Update soon, my friend! I'll definitely be waiting on an update for this piece!
| Melissa Norvell chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
I absolutely love this story! But I love anything that has to deal with horror and angst, lol.
It's good to see you writing again, my friend. It's been a while since I've read anything of yours. Then again, I think it's been a while since you've updated as well.
I really like the aspect of loss of sanity here, and there are many questions that I hope to find out about this deranged experimentation ground they call a hospital.
I'd read more but my break is only so long. I'll probably read more when I get off work!
Keep up the grand work, I can't wait to read the second chapter!
| Tsumujikaze no Soujutsu chapter 2 . 1/28/2009
Well, never expected you to update so fast here. Anyway again an interesting chapter here. :) I like the way you did the part on Anna's sanity here. It seems that she will snap pretty much soon. Maybe in the next chapte based on what you've written at the end of this chapter. Anyway, Friedrich seems like an interesting character. Maybe having him being some kind of mentor character? Anyway, good chapter here and hope to see more of your reviews for the rest of my stories soon! Bye! :)
P.S: I dunno whether I'll do it, but if Boro lose tonight vs Chelsea, I can very likely be starting on a new Elven Chronicles chapter soon. High time I should do that and I always have a drive to write whenever Boro lose it's matches. :S
| Tsumujikaze no Soujutsu chapter 1 . 1/27/2009
Herro there! Glad to see you up an running here again. :) Anyway, good story you've got here. And on your inspirations, I more or less can understand. :) Anyway, I do find this story to have a good starting plot. I do think that this one will be more plot centred compared to your other ongoing works. Anyway, Anna seems like an interesting character here with her own conflicts existence wise. Also, I really wonder about the so-called hospital. Ok, I admit it's rather diabolical, but tbh I'll be more than interested to see what reasons lie behind it's existence. Anyway, hope to see this continue. And yeah, thanks for your reviews on Seal of Valor. Hope to see more of your reviews for my other stories as well soon! Bye! :)