Reviews for Imani
Shiro.Kokoro chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
slam poetry is pretty awesome.

like beat poetry, yeah?

anyway, this is cool, what you've done. I like it.
Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
i love how you use the language; my only

complaint (too strong, that word) is how

it lapses intermittently into being too

literal, but prob that's to convey the

message lucidly in a spoken piece; i doubt

that's necessary, though. for pete's sake

keep writing and evolving and i hope grow

more stylized to project your singular pov

on this too mechanical world. yay.
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
it's very beautiful and tragic at the same time. i've never heard a story (on here)from this perspective. good job for being unique.