|Reviews for Imani|
| Shiro.Kokoro chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
slam poetry is pretty awesome.
like beat poetry, yeah?
anyway, this is cool, what you've done. I like it.
| Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
i love how you use the language; my only
complaint (too strong, that word) is how
it lapses intermittently into being too
literal, but prob that's to convey the
message lucidly in a spoken piece; i doubt
that's necessary, though. for pete's sake
keep writing and evolving and i hope grow
more stylized to project your singular pov
on this too mechanical world. yay.
| East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
it's very beautiful and tragic at the same time. i've never heard a story (on here)from this perspective. good job for being unique.