|Reviews for The Slave of Heaven Book One|
| Lily chapter 46 . 5/23/2009
How cool is it that I have the same name as the maiin character? Lol :):)
That was the beginning of the end of Lilith St. Augustine. when I read that.. What I thought it meant was the descent of Lilith as a St. Augustine... but I could be wrong.. It could be the descent of the whole of Lily (if that makes sense).. like being a wolf is a part of her.. and being a st. augustine is another part.. so the beginning of the end of Lilth could be the descent of all of her.. and yeah... i think I'm starting to not make sense.. lol
That's just my thoughts. :)
| Maelne chapter 46 . 5/21/2009
The emotions conveyed in these past few chapters have been of great variations that make me oh so happy! lol I can't wait to read more. Also, I'm 'on the edge of my seat' happy that this isn't anywhere near the end! :) How could it be when you've just started a whole new story. So much foreboding! O.O :):):):)
| midnight84118 chapter 46 . 5/21/2009
love this story
| boltfromtheblue101 chapter 46 . 5/21/2009
This. Story. Is. Amazing.
If I could leave it at that, I would, but this thing is just too damn incredible to do that.
Your writing style is impeccable, graceful and elegant in its own raw and honest beauty. This story deserved that Best Plot award; it's certainly the most developed and involved I've ever seen!
I find myself having to look up definitions of words, terms, and most especially races and creatures (Unseelie? Cu Sith? Whaa?). Fret not; that's an extraordinarily good thing, as I don't come across many stories that can make me do that. I love learning new words. XD
I LOVE your use of the hierarchy of angels and mythological creatures. You're not like those other writers who just throw that kind of stuff into their stories and hope it makes sense; you actually know what you're talking about!
Can I just say that I wish Lilith were my best friend? She's hilarious! She's rational and reasonable. She is wary of getting caught up in the heat of the moment (though we all know that the seductive pull of Lucien can just be too damn... well, seductive!). I understand her reluctance to turn her back on everything she's been taught all her life. I mean, what? Just because some smokin' hot vampire tells you so, you're gonna just drop your entire belief system like a rock? So what I'm trying to say is, Lily's my favorite leading lady. Ever.
I heart Lucien. The man should have his own fan club.
Okay, I just want to say a little something about your characters in general. I don't think I've ever read a story where the characters were as real to me as they are in yours. They aren't empty words on a page; they are living, breathing people with real emotions and real problems, with real strengths and real weaknesses. I find myself on the edge of my seat, reacting to each of your characters in what they have said or done. Worrying about Lily. Swooning over Lucien. Warming up to Aislynn. Hating Aubree and co. Confused and slightly weirded out by Alec (the vibe I am getting from that boy is FAR from brotherly...). And just being utterly excited, entranced, and exhausted by each and every one. Respectively.
Errors? Few and far between. Only minor spelling mistakes so far as I've seen. That is, all except one that really irks the hell out of me. Who in the world is Angela? I think you are mistakenly calling Helena Angela, but I could be wrong. I could have missed the entire introduction to a character. That would suck... You know, it would be great if you could PM me back to clear this whole thing up because quite frankly it is now going to bother me to pieces.
Honestly? I am so enthralled by this work of art. It is truly one of a kind. You know how sometimes when people read your work they go, "Oh, that reminds me of such and such!" Well that really pisses me off when people tell me that. The one thing I really don't like about the writing world is that nothing is original anymore. Every idea's been done. At least, that's what I thought until I read this story (which took me like two days to finish, mind you). I've never seen anyone spin a yarn of such quality that intertwines love, trust, betrayal, heartache, and every mythical and supernatural creature of the known and unknown universe. This is quite honestly the best story I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Job well done.
Sorry for droning on and on. I just felt it needed to be said. It's the longest review I think I've ever written. XD Again, sorry.
| HelgaBertoni chapter 46 . 5/20/2009
Good chapter, update soon!
| JuliaCeleste chapter 46 . 5/20/2009
I really like this book. so if you don't finsih it i will be sad. and i would really like a sequel. i will be sad if there is no sequel. i also get upset when i am sad. so if you don't want me to come attack you with a plastic spork, then i suggest you post a sequel. and that was not a direct threat. it was a warning. you do not want a plastic spork sticking out of your back. at least i would hope not.
| Lily chapter 46 . 5/20/2009
OMG! I seriously cannot wait till book 2! gah!
It was brilliant, as always..:P I'm really looking forward to understanding what was up with Alec (why he was acting weird around lily).. ..
Another rewrite... wow! I will of course read everything. lol
You are such an amazing writer. :)
| Stahlut chapter 46 . 5/19/2009
Oh my god that was so so so good. It's funny how she can annoy me without actually making me angry about it. Because I want to keep reading becasue of her reactions. And I also can't deny how awesome lucien is, no matter how evil he was at the end of this chapter. Actually that makes him better lol. Anyway, good chapter and I really hope you update soon, I love it!
| Annabel Wynters chapter 46 . 5/19/2009
haha Shes screwed! ANoTHER REwRITE? thats the 3rd I'd have to read to make sure I get the whole story! I hope that your search goes well with the literary agent. I hope that you'll keep all of us fans informed on your search.
~ as always Cheeto
| measuringcup34 chapter 46 . 5/19/2009
So one more chapter then the story is over?
| ValerieYoung chapter 46 . 5/19/2009
awesome chappie! cant wait 4 da next chappie!
| bela13 chapter 46 . 5/19/2009
i'm happy i liked this chapter...i'd just like to point something out though luce in the earlyer chapters was more endearing hes changed maybe it fits a little but idk i just had a soft spot for him when he was like that...note for lilith though her lips are part of her body :)
| readaholicxxx chapter 46 . 5/19/2009
the ending to this chapter was perfect i think-makes me think that Lilith is definitely changing into a different person altogether with all that has happened and all that will happen
| becomings chapter 45 . 5/17/2009
I am incredibly blown away by this, to the point where I had to read all forty-five chapters in a single sitting. The entire idea of this is so impressive and well-thought out, from the combating races to Lilith's fate. Your characters are powerfully built and seem very, very real, and I feel that your take on Lucien's reaction was spot on. This is such a breath of relief when posed against the trite and cliche works found here. I've praised plenty, not enough to do this work justice, but I really do feel that the entire tale is flawless, albeit the handful of evident typos found throughout. :) Please do not let it rot away. I almost feel as if my taste in fiction has just been redefined.
| I. N. Philips chapter 45 . 5/17/2009
Please update soon...