the ending to this chapter was perfect i think-makes me think that Lilith is definitely changing into a different person altogether with all that has happened and all that will happen

update soon!

I am incredibly blown away by this, to the point where I had to read all forty-five chapters in a single sitting. The entire idea of this is so impressive and well-thought out, from the combating races to Lilith's fate. Your characters are powerfully built and seem very, very real, and I feel that your take on Lucien's reaction was spot on. This is such a breath of relief when posed against the trite and cliche works found here. I've praised plenty, not enough to do this work justice, but I really do feel that the entire tale is flawless, albeit the handful of evident typos found throughout. :) Please do not let it rot away. I almost feel as if my taste in fiction has just been redefined.

Please update soon...

AUBREE BETTER NOT BE DEAD! AND ALEC BETTER NOT BE PERMANENTLY, GRUESOMELY, SCARRED. My heart couldn't stand it :( But good job with the new chapters :)

I absolutely love your story! I'm practically obsessed with it. I kinda thought that Lucian was in love with her being a wolf and not actually her to begin with, so I'm not really surprised. Even though your still working on Anu, I really like what you have so far. He seemed really evil, but very sexy evil, and I have to wonder what's to come of him and Lilith... If you do make Lucian and Lilith fall in love, I'll be squealing with giddyness! But I really want to know, what the heck is going on with her and Alec...? Is she why he won't marry?

I think he should be in love with Lilith and Lilith should love him back. That's what I think and I'll be pissed if something happens to them.

O.O Oh My Gosh!

It doesn't matter how long the chapter are! Good gracious, your chapters are good! Stop worrying about the length of it. Just write what you want to and it'll be great :)

Oh! :D :D

This story has me on the edge of my seat! :) You've twisted the real world with a world of fiction that I've always wanted to see. I love this story! :)

WHoly Shit! :D

intricate plot and very interesting. I found your story through that award website and i'm glad i stumbled onto it.

:) This story is well written and very imaginative. But I think I might just go ca-rae-zy if this whole thing with her "changing" isn't explained soon.

Wow, I would have a panic attack if I couldn't breath with that corset on ha ha NO, REALLY. I would panic then pass out. I don't see how they wore those things back then. They caused serious health issues too! Squishing your organs together and what not. All fun and beauty until you die of being squished to death. Anyways...what's with her brother acting all not brotherly but boyfriendly?

oh...ah...ugh