Reviews for The Slave of Heaven Book One
Maelne chapter 42 . 5/15/2009
AUBREE BETTER NOT BE DEAD! AND ALEC BETTER NOT BE PERMANENTLY, GRUESOMELY, SCARRED. My heart couldn't stand it :( But good job with the new chapters :)
xXSaraphine-DominoXx chapter 45 . 5/12/2009
I absolutely love your story! I'm practically obsessed with it. I kinda thought that Lucian was in love with her being a wolf and not actually her to begin with, so I'm not really surprised. Even though your still working on Anu, I really like what you have so far. He seemed really evil, but very sexy evil, and I have to wonder what's to come of him and Lilith... If you do make Lucian and Lilith fall in love, I'll be squealing with giddyness! But I really want to know, what the heck is going on with her and Alec...? Is she why he won't marry?
Maelne chapter 32 . 5/11/2009
I think he should be in love with Lilith and Lilith should love him back. That's what I think and I'll be pissed if something happens to them.
Maelne chapter 30 . 5/11/2009
O.O Oh My Gosh!
Maelne chapter 28 . 5/11/2009
It doesn't matter how long the chapter are! Good gracious, your chapters are good! Stop worrying about the length of it. Just write what you want to and it'll be great :)
Maelne chapter 20 . 5/9/2009
Oh! :D :D
Maelne chapter 19 . 5/9/2009
This story has me on the edge of my seat! :) You've twisted the real world with a world of fiction that I've always wanted to see. I love this story! :)
Maelne chapter 18 . 5/9/2009
WHoly Shit! :D
Iphegenia101 chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
intricate plot and very interesting. I found your story through that award website and i'm glad i stumbled onto it.
Maelne chapter 17 . 5/8/2009
:) This story is well written and very imaginative. But I think I might just go ca-rae-zy if this whole thing with her "changing" isn't explained soon.
Maelne chapter 8 . 5/7/2009
Wow, I would have a panic attack if I couldn't breath with that corset on ha ha NO, REALLY. I would panic then pass out. I don't see how they wore those things back then. They caused serious health issues too! Squishing your organs together and what not. All fun and beauty until you die of being squished to death. Anyways...what's with her brother acting all not brotherly but boyfriendly?
Maelne chapter 7 . 5/7/2009
oh...ah...ugh
Maelne chapter 6 . 5/7/2009
Geez, Nephilim men are such egotists. I love the story though! :)
Maelne chapter 4 . 5/6/2009
Oh WOW O.O I LOVE THIS!
AZ chapter 45 . 5/3/2009
Your a great writer! I cant wait for next update! [
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