|Reviews for The Slave of Heaven Book One|
| Annabel Wynters chapter 45 . 5/2/2009
I love the Anu part! I understand the thing with the fever, but I felt so bad for Lucien! she was dead and he brought her back but he was just hurting her more! I need more! pretty please with cheese! ;D
| Stahlut chapter 45 . 5/1/2009
Wow I love this story, it is really really really good. Even when you disagree with a character it doesn't make it harder to read, in fact it makes it much more exciting. I really really hope that you update soon, because I truthfully just can not wait to read more
| PBArcadia chapter 45 . 4/29/2009
Holy shit! This was even more intense than I had ever anticipated. Waking up on the middle of a surgery like that is everyone's worst nightmare and you brought it to live so clearly it had me twisting in agony for her. Bravo on the entire scene!
| auntie carol chapter 3 . 4/28/2009
all i can say is that I can't wait to read the next chapter tonight. If you can keep my interest with material that i am not accustomed to reading, you have to be a great writer.
| auntie carol chapter 2 . 4/26/2009
okay...so I lied. I couldn't stop reading it. It is so good. Now I really have to go to bed. You have to publish this book.
| your favorite aunt chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
I think the first chapter is awesome. I actually want to continue reading the rest. I love the way you write. I actually feel like the character is like you. I do not want to stop reading, but I have to go to bed. love you
| Maelne chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
| Lily chapter 45 . 4/25/2009
well.. I must say I am a little disappointed that Luce doesn't love Lily for who she is. But that's only because I REALLY want them together. It's understandable because he hasn't known her for very long etc. He cares a little bit about her though, right? um it was very a good chapter.. I loved it...
I also agree with MZ PEACHESZZ about the book thing.. lol.. I really wanna know what this is all about - “Resurrect me, Orpheus, and I will be your Eurydice.”
umm.. anyway I really hope this message actually makes sense...and you know what I'm talking about.
| readaholicxxx chapter 45 . 4/25/2009
| Imagination's Dust chapter 45 . 4/25/2009
I completely agree with what you say in your AN about Lucie n not being worried about Lilith but about the wolf that's her. It makes perfect sense and I would honestly dislike him if he were to "fall in lurve" with her. That's a little too...high-school idiocy. XD
And it wouldn't make much sense. He hasn't known her all that well.
This chapter was exciting. Update faster! o_o
| MZ PEACHESZZ chapter 45 . 4/25/2009
I do understand what you say about love; although I am dissapointed, I do understand that. It did seem he was much more concerned and worried about the idea of her wolf being gone rather than Lillith herself. It's been like that for a while now so it makes sense. I hope he does come to truly, genuinely care and love for her and I hope I don't have to wait for 2 or 5 more books for that to be apparent. But this was a GREAT chapter- one of my most favorites thus far. It was exciting and like a rollarcoaster. It was definitely worth the wait and I do hope you update soon! I loved seeing Lucien here (even though he doesn't love her yet..arghh..) but it was great. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Also, this is just a side note, but I know you are planning on writing a few more books. That's great but as far as publishing goes, most authors go in trying to sell one book and then, if that works out, put in a contract for a few more books. So usually, the authors have to have a book that is self-contained on it's own meaning that the first book you give to them should be able to stand by itself, perhaps whetting the audience for more but ultimately, leaving most things tied up so in case there isn't a call for more books, that book can stand on its own. I'm concerned that because you have this great, thought-out vision, you may leave a lot of things unanswered and unresolved and I don't know if that would fly in the publishing world. Just some food for thought. :) One way to kind of resolve this type of dilemna is to tie up this Anu drama and forge some sort of definite ( but not absolute) relationship between Lucien and Lillith. What this does is resolve the current drama ( in both the romantic and conflict sense) but still leave room for future problems because of the world's chaos and the many areas for exploration in this still mysterious world. The future books can reveal new developments in Lillith and Lucien's relationship- how they can learn to truly love each other, conflicts, how being together can be difficult but ultimately rewarding ( that's my inner romantic and love for Lucien and Lillith coming out...). BUt yea, JUST some food for thought.
Anwyays, didn't mean to leave such a long message but basically I LOVED this chapter and I can't wait until teh next one!
| measuringcup34 chapter 45 . 4/25/2009
i really liked the part with anu and lilith when she's unconcous.
even though she doesn't wasnt to help anu it shows she's a bit powerless and how powerful he is. I liked it.
Lucien did seem a bit soft but not in an annoying lovey dovey wayy
and lancealot was from the harvest game thing right?
| HelgaBertoni chapter 45 . 4/25/2009
Loved it, update soon!
| magic writer chapter 45 . 4/25/2009
i love your story there really good, cant wait for the next chapter
| Jacey Thunder chapter 45 . 4/25/2009
you can def. see that it's the wolf in her that has him upset...and not love.
It's actually the first thing i thought of when reading this...and then i read your note on the bottom and it confirmed it...
La la la Love it!