Reviews for The Slave of Heaven Book One
Annasikanda chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
OMG plz update I am having serious Lucien withdrawls!
MZ PEACHESZZ chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
oh wow, it's been a while! PLEASE PLEASE do not become one of those authors that like never updates. I've been away from Lucien too long.

Update soon!
SpotWillRuleTheWorld chapter 43 . 3/31/2009
I have never read the original Slave of Heaven so please keep on writing. This is one of my favorite stories.
Lily chapter 43 . 3/28/2009
gah! PLEASE update...

pretty please? with a cherry on top?

I love your story.. It's soo good...

I want more Lucien time...
Annabel Wynters chapter 43 . 3/22/2009
HI! Finally I got caught up! this is the 1st time I've gotten to really sit down and read. I really liked this chapter, especially this line. "I wanted to live. And for that, I would die." It holds so much strenght behind it!

Any who, I burned my pointer finger all the way from base to knuckle and tomorrow (3-23) is my birthday!

Can't wait for the next chapter and I hope that your writing goes easier. :D
Noctilucous chapter 43 . 3/21/2009
This is awesome, you got my spellbound by your every word. But please repair the mistakes. Keep up the amazing work!
Bespelled chapter 43 . 3/20/2009

I'm totally in love with your story. And Alec. And Lucien. :D

I just wanted to say that your story is what introduced me to the fascinating topic of ancient religions. I've only dabbled in Greek and Roman mythology before I read it, and all I can say is that it’s always great to expand your horizons. :D

The legend of Lilith especially interests me, since it has its ties to the Bible. I’m a Catholic, but it’s good to know things past your own beliefs. It gives you a more objective view of everything.

I can’t wait for your next chapter!
debatablywonderful chapter 43 . 3/16/2009
Wow, don't mess with her likes lol. I LOVE this change in her! Like some warrior or something, ripping her dress and rampaging through the woods wielding her weapon haha. Finally though! She's been so frustratingly submissive and compliant for most of the story and to see her finally take a stand and fight! eep, lets just say I'm totally excited for the next update! Lilith fighting, woo! BTW, end note was fabulous on this chapter! 'I WILL stand my ground'! Totally reminded me of within temptations song, 'stand my ground'.

The only small criticism, well, not 'criticism' but whatever is when the hound is transforming? I'm not quite sure lol, I just got a little lost there. And it wasn't exactly the lack of description, I just couldn't really get my head around it haha.

But! otherwise I was totally getting into it, probably so much I was becoming a little geeky :P. Oh! and the chapter before this one too! I actually like full body flinched or what not when Alex got his eye cut! And when she got hit with the fireball thing, I really hope she isn't dead though. Excellent description with that scene by the way, I could totally picture it to a T in my head.

Anyhoo's thanks again for the great read, and I'll pop back later for the next chappie when it comes! :)
ThexSkyxGray chapter 43 . 3/16/2009
i liked this chapter a lot. especially the part where lily fights against the part of her nature that urges her to run away. i cant wait for the next update!
readaholicxxx chapter 43 . 3/16/2009
i love this chapter

especially because Lilith chooses to fight

wow i can't wait to find out wat happens

please update soon!
Stephanie daisies4no1 chapter 43 . 3/15/2009
I positively love this chapter! Lillith finally finds her courage and embraces her wolf side, even if she hasn't changed yet. I really was hoping to see Anu in this chapter but I think it was perfect the way you wrote it. Can't wait for the next one! Keep up the good work )
That One Dork Stacey chapter 43 . 3/15/2009



I REALLY like this chapter. I don't see why you didn't love it as much as I do :[ I felt like such a dork for being on the edge of my chair and pretty much biting my nails while reading it. [Btw, I don't usually get like that over stories] I LOVED this chapter. OMG! I can't wait til the next! UGH! More! More! :[

I told you I was addicted -.-

It's all your fault :P Now I'm going to be at school thinking about a fiction character all of next week : I so blame you :P .. not that it's a bad thing. :]


-Stace :D
Lorna chapter 43 . 3/15/2009
Amazing story

if this was a book i would never put it down 'till i knew the end of it..

and finally! lilith is embracing her true self :)
Holy Catty chapter 43 . 3/15/2009
I like this chapter so much!

She's finally going to fight! no more coward yay yippee whoopie XD
tffny012 chapter 43 . 3/15/2009
why won't the spirits help her?

and when is lucien coming back? hopefully soon!

update again soon!
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