Reviews for The Slave of Heaven Book One
Lily chapter 43 . 3/14/2009
I agree with what MZ PEACHESZZ said... (about how you shouldn't make Lily change too fast...but she needs to have a balance between independence and reliance..)... i think she summed my thoughts up pretty well... especially when she sed I miss Lucien.


I love it.

Please stop worrying about your work...and stop being disappointed. It's BRILLIANT! I practically scream when I find that you have updated... Have some faith in yourself. You are an excellent writer who WILL get published.

Be happy with your work.

Lucien makes me feel warm and fuzzy.. lol.

but seriously.. i'm like in love with your story..

i should probably stop now.

Lily chapter 43 . 3/14/2009
ahh! I love it. I thought that chapter was good. I can't wait till Lily finally accepts that she is a wolf.. and I want more Lucien time.

lol.. Please update soon... it's very good.. How many books were you planning on writing?

Love it.
MZ PEACHESZZ chapter 43 . 3/14/2009
Also, I had a question- how many chapters, do you suppose, are left? Like an estimate? And are there going to be more books ( series?) because I think you did mention this would that be? Like, is it going to be a series of books..ugh, I don't even know what I'm asking..basically, what's in store for Lillith ( and Lucien) ?
MZ PEACHESZZ chapter 43 . 3/14/2009
I really did like that sense of command that Lillith displayed towards the end; she really has been sheltered and been rendered dependent on everyone, especially the male members of her family. But then again, that really is the culture she has been brought up in and although it is no excuse, I really do understand why she's acted the way she has- I really like Lillith! She's not invincible or this totally fearless and courageous girl- she's normal, stumbling along the way, but for that, I like her even more. The only thing I would caution against would be making her change in character too much or too fast- control it, gauge it, because in the end, I still want to see the Lillith we know! Just with some amazing growth ( as in, Lucien by her side...haha). I liked this chapter- it was definitely a bit heavy in some parts but it was a very necessary chapter. Please, please do update as soon as you can!

I miss Lucien.


Also, I hope Lillith gets to a point where she can be her own person but still maintain a healthy combination of independence and depending on others because that is necessary. She can't do everything by herself- but she can become more of who she wants to be.


i miss lucien.

bela13 chapter 43 . 3/14/2009
i like it even if you don't it finnaly showed the strength that was there just below lilith's surface i'm happy with it...
xhoneyinheavenx chapter 43 . 3/14/2009
This is the most amazing story ever!

And I like this chapter. I know people are always more critical of there own work, but I can honestly say this was one of your best. Just stop worrying about it! The more you do the worse you will think it is. leave it for like a couple of weeks and read it again at which point you will either deside that its fine or rewrite it.

LOVE your story,

measuringcup34 chapter 43 . 3/14/2009
i really like the character growth in lilith and it's awesome she decided to stay and fight

and why didn't lucian come if he's a wolf? couldn't he destroy the bloodhound?
HelgaBertoni chapter 43 . 3/14/2009
Love it, update as soon as you can!
Imagination's Dust chapter 43 . 3/14/2009
Oh my, Lily was a big coward in this chapter. Very frustrating, I might say, which is good because it entices emotional response from your readers. XD Update faster! :D

- HT
TheWiseBoob chapter 42 . 3/12/2009
Well good luck on the school front I too am a victim of the higher educational system so may I say... I feel your pain...

I have to admit when I first started reading this I was going to get all upset cause I’m plotting a story involving nephilim as well but your interpretation is completely different, and actually kind of more interesting, then mine so I’m not so bummed. Which I’m sure you don’t really care about but still I felt compelled to share…

Oh and my I say I love your fugly blood hound friend and hope you don’t change him much he brings a bit of horror to the table. You’ve created a very pretty world esthetically, pretty angels, pretty vampires, pretty elves… I love how he brings a bit of ugly into the mix makes me feel right with the world ;)

Keep on keepin’ on my friend!

Holy Catty chapter 42 . 3/10/2009
I'm really starting to hate her. She's not spoiled but she doesnt have courage. she depends on others while her friends and family sacrafice their lives for her. Yet she does not wake up, forever relying, forever depending. I think it's kinda annoying.

PS: NO! don't go back to ur old schedule T.T
Annabel Wynters chapter 41 . 3/10/2009
*Squeals with joy!* YAY! New Stuff! I love you, I love you, I love you and your story so much! Finally,the long awaited new chapter is up and I have become a fangirl. You see what your story has done? LOL anyways, I liked this chapter a lot, Alec reminds me of my older sister because she's WAY overprotective of me but it seems as if his protection isn't exactly the type a brother would have for a sister.

I can't wait to read the next chapter but I have to go to school now.
MZ PEACHESZZ chapter 9 . 3/9/2009
love this story. egh. update.
MZ PEACHESZZ chapter 8 . 3/9/2009
I really, really love this story. And where is this beast going to take her? I can't wait for an update.
MZ PEACHESZZ chapter 7 . 3/9/2009
I really want you to get to 100. You deserve way more reviews, though.

please, please update as soon as you can!
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