I liked this but...no Lucien! T_T Thou wounds me! It was short in comparison, or it seemed to be, and I wonder what Lucien's reaction would be when he finds his mate getting betrothed to some other guy. XD

Update soon!

- HT

I liked this chapter; clearly, your creative instincts were coming out. It was different- it was less plot or dialogue based and more focused on her inner tumult and conflicted musings. I wish she wouldn't feel so guilty but I do understand, to some degree, how confused she must be. The whirlwind of the past 24 hours is just settling and she has many things to think over. AH! SHE CAN'T GET MARRIED TO ICKY SORIN!I hope Lucien gets jealous over this, VERY VERY jealous. I miss him already. But I do love reading about her world and the various interactions- always interesting. She was so hollow in this chapter- I hope she comes more alive in the coming chapters and we see some Lucien! Ah, I hate this waiting because I keep wanting to read more. UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN! everytime there's an update, a smile literally breaks out on my face. Loved it! UPDATE SOON! CANT WAIT FOR MORE!

and can I say, Alec is a creepy mothereffer! Love it!

i like how you see her character changing a bit like she's seeing behind the scenes of her normal life. like how she's supposed to not have a choice.

update soon

omg... please update.. I need a good dose of TSOH...

i love it. )

update, update! its the weekend...update!

Hey.

I honestly love your story. The plot is intricate and compelling, and your characterization is brilliant. Lilith is truly believable, someone I can really associate with.

And Lucien is just too goddamn sexy.

But what I absolutely adore is the power of your world - its rich history, complex hierarchy, and interesting cultures.

I can’t wait for your next chapter and other future works!

update! update! update! update!

i am so looking forward to an update! woohoo! UPDATE!

YAY! ALL CAUGHT UP!-ISH! :D I am positively bouncing right now. I cannot wait til you update next. It's taken me a while to get to back to this place. It was so worth it. Keep it up Ry!

-Stace! :D

Woot! Lucien to the rescue! God, he makes me all hot and bothered, is that bad? Great job in the story-telling part, neither boring nor dry. Pefect!

I aboslutely love your story! You're doing a great job!

Is this going to be a series?

Oh god, they are just too cute. When she asked him not to leave her and how he takes care of her subtly- oh god, amazing! Love it! Want more! And yess! NEW CHAPTERS! I CANT WAIT! I really really cant wait for new chapters and more Lillith and Lucien. UPDATE SOON!

And don't be nervous about new stuff! I'm sure you outline your books but anyways, that should help give you a barebones of how to structure and lay out the story- as in, the key objectives that you need to get in and as long as you structure your story out, fleshing it out shouldn't be a problem for you. It's an amazing story-I don't know how many times I'm going to tell you this- but I really can't wait for new chapters and see what unfolds next! I'm hoping for a lot of drama, action, danger, intrigue and hot steaminess between Luce and Lillith! Until next time!

you know, I don't know why I get so excited when I get updates for this story because I'm pretty much reading the same thing over ( for the 5th time? I know, I'm addicted) until we get to the newer chapters. Lillith and Lucien are just so cute- I can't wait until I see something more develop between them. Throw in some action and danger! Can't wait for the next udate! We're almost there :)

Finally almost there. If I recall, the next chapter was hilarious when they slide down the roof. XD Update soon!

- HT

no close dose not count jkjk i like this one it brings back some of the old luce that was being lost and a few chapters back you forgot to put in why lilith was in her sisters jeans at the bar. glade you love your story and mabey your readers enough to update often thankyou

Several typos and stuff but good as usual. I'm awaiting the bit where he drops her back home. That's where the last bit end so I'm wondering what happens next. When will you update next?

- HT