Reviews for The Slave of Heaven Book One
Lily chapter 40 . 3/7/2009
omg... please update.. I need a good dose of TSOH...

i love it. )
MZ PEACHESZZ chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
update, update! its the weekend...update!
Bespelled chapter 40 . 3/4/2009
Hey.

I honestly love your story. The plot is intricate and compelling, and your characterization is brilliant. Lilith is truly believable, someone I can really associate with.

And Lucien is just too goddamn sexy.

But what I absolutely adore is the power of your world - its rich history, complex hierarchy, and interesting cultures.

I can’t wait for your next chapter and other future works!
MZ PEACHESZZ chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
update! update! update! update!

i am so looking forward to an update! woohoo! UPDATE!
That One Dork Stacey chapter 40 . 3/2/2009
YAY! ALL CAUGHT UP!-ISH! :D I am positively bouncing right now. I cannot wait til you update next. It's taken me a while to get to back to this place. It was so worth it. Keep it up Ry!

-Stace! :D
PBArcadia chapter 40 . 3/2/2009
Woot! Lucien to the rescue! God, he makes me all hot and bothered, is that bad? Great job in the story-telling part, neither boring nor dry. Pefect!
tigerlilies1021 chapter 40 . 3/2/2009
I aboslutely love your story! You're doing a great job!

Is this going to be a series?
MZ PEACHESZZ chapter 40 . 3/1/2009
Oh god, they are just too cute. When she asked him not to leave her and how he takes care of her subtly- oh god, amazing! Love it! Want more! And yess! NEW CHAPTERS! I CANT WAIT! I really really cant wait for new chapters and more Lillith and Lucien. UPDATE SOON!

And don't be nervous about new stuff! I'm sure you outline your books but anyways, that should help give you a barebones of how to structure and lay out the story- as in, the key objectives that you need to get in and as long as you structure your story out, fleshing it out shouldn't be a problem for you. It's an amazing story-I don't know how many times I'm going to tell you this- but I really can't wait for new chapters and see what unfolds next! I'm hoping for a lot of drama, action, danger, intrigue and hot steaminess between Luce and Lillith! Until next time!
MZ PEACHESZZ chapter 39 . 3/1/2009
you know, I don't know why I get so excited when I get updates for this story because I'm pretty much reading the same thing over ( for the 5th time? I know, I'm addicted) until we get to the newer chapters. Lillith and Lucien are just so cute- I can't wait until I see something more develop between them. Throw in some action and danger! Can't wait for the next udate! We're almost there :)
Imagination's Dust chapter 39 . 3/1/2009
Finally almost there. If I recall, the next chapter was hilarious when they slide down the roof. XD Update soon!

- HT
bela13 chapter 38 . 3/1/2009
no close dose not count jkjk i like this one it brings back some of the old luce that was being lost and a few chapters back you forgot to put in why lilith was in her sisters jeans at the bar. glade you love your story and mabey your readers enough to update often thankyou
Imagination's Dust chapter 38 . 3/1/2009
Several typos and stuff but good as usual. I'm awaiting the bit where he drops her back home. That's where the last bit end so I'm wondering what happens next. When will you update next?

- HT
MZ PEACHESZZ chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
update today! yehee!
PBArcadia chapter 37 . 2/28/2009
For someone that claims not to do "lust scenes" often, you left me panting like a...well, you get the idea.
PBArcadia chapter 33 . 2/28/2009
The intensity of this chapter is so palpable it left me breathless. You did a great job defining the emotions that ought to go under the circumstances, for all the characters involved.
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