Reviews for The Slave of Heaven Book One |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i have been meaning to review on this story before, but i haven't had the time to do so. I just wanted to let you know that this is and absolutly amazing stroy. I love the amount of detaling and emotion that has gone into it. it is fantastic, at the end of each chapter im draged to the next, seriously. The amout of detail and emtion, is outstanding. the plot is briliant, it makes you want to read more, to find out what is going to happen, and why all these strange things keep happening to her. It is briliant and i love it to bits. The diffrent races, the rockstar vampire, her father seems so stricked, that it made me want to cry on how he talked to her for the first time in the story, Alec seems like a very intresting character and, to me, seems like he likes his sister a more than he should, but that is just me. it is a fab story and i can't wait to find out what happens. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw congratualtions! That's so romantic-how did you react? |
![]() ![]() ![]() congratulations! and thanx for the update, looking forward to the next book! :DD |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww, congratulations! i love weddings (as much as jack sparrow). thats great news. i'm sure your nervous about sending this story to agents but as a faithful reader (and fan), they'd be blind and stupid not to accept it. its one of my favourites. ;) all the best and keep us updated. i can't wait to read the sequel. p.s well done for completing your thesis- with flying colours by the looks of it. what was it on? |
![]() ![]() Been up til 3am because I had to finish this story. You've had me completely hooked but my brain has turned to mush now and I can't leave a proper review. Thanks for writing such enthralling stuff xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Congrats on your engagement! I hope all goes well! And yay! I can't wait to read Let Sleeping Gods Lie! I'm looking forward to the next udpate! x Delineations . Alyona |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay the goats is back i missed you. i can not wait for you to start posting again. :D (giant smily face) SUBMITIT IT TO A WRITING AGENCY if twilight made it then yours will easily pass through with such and intricate story line and characters they would be crazy not to :) ~me |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story- it's a true fantasy (thank you high school myth and fantasy course), and the new world is intricate and believable. Though I was a bit lost in the first few chapters on what exactly was going on, I caught on and read the entire story through the night. I can't wait to read any revision, the sequel or even buy the published work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congrats! Can't wait for an update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congrats on getting engaged! Take your time with Let Sleeping Gods Lie, a few more weeks really wont make a difference. It's so nice that you really are gonna write a sequal. MAny authors say they will finish, but many don't I'm glad you are not one of them. HAppy writing and update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congratulations! You'll find a way to start the new book, don't worry. Just watch, it'll randomly come to you while you're drinking hot chocolate in front of your fireplace/TV. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I'm happy to hear that the story is still a live and that you're not abandoning it! And wow college sounds intense, I might as well enjoy my last few years in high school. Congratulations to you getting proposed to! It's crazy because I live in NYC! Hah. I can't wait until the first chapter of "Let Sleeping Gods Lie" come out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() CONGRATS! On both your thesis and being engaged, that's awesome! I'm so glad to hear that you've been doing well and that you haven't left this wonderful story in the dark. I seriously am so ECSTATIC to see your next update! I've missed Lilth & Luce (Luce, especially, he's one of my favorite fictional vampires on this sight ;) ) Well good luck on your finals this week! Can't wait to see the first chapter of "Let Sleeping Gods Lie!" Ever your faithful reader, Dramalover21 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congratulations on getting engaged! What a wonderful step in your relationship and his proposed seems like it was pretty romantic! I look forward to reading the next book. Cassandra |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congratulations on finishing and receiving such a good grade on your thesis and the engagement (so exciting!)! I'm sure all your fans (myself included) are really happy for you! I hope that you are happy as well! Now the moment of truth: you have to submit your work for consideration if you want to be published. It's super scary to put yourself out there (I'm a photographer and basically have to do the same thing for shows and exhibits) and there will be rejections, and those hurt, but when someone finally sees the worth and absolute beauty of your writing, it will make all the stress and heartache worth it (not to mention the endorphins that banish every dark thought from your mind). I really hope you do become published, because I know I will be one of the first in line! Good luck! |