Wow. It took me 27 hours to read all chapters and, beyond simple word choice and spelling errors, I think this is one of the best things I have read in quite awhile. It mosy certainly well and above the cliche garbage that litters this site. I sincerely hope you get published.

I'm definitely still intersted and good luck with all of that lol you've got a load on you!

I am so excited to hear about the introduction of a male vampire rival to Lucien, hopefully there will be some jealousy there. And I really can't wait to read the second book! (I read your original and this rewrite in a week, it was that GOOD!)My birthday is in November so that's really exciting for me to hear that there is a possibility of your sequel coming out.

I would buy your book if it were to be published! Hopefully, Barnes & Nobles or another large bookstore would buy some of your copies. That would be really awesome.

Just to let you know, your series is WAY better than the Twilight series. Honestly, I thought the first Twilight book was okay but the rest was awkward and over dramatic! The Slave of Heaven I think is really complex and it doesn't just revolve around Lucien and Lilith, though I really like their interactions, which is really good since most writers revolve their stories around the protagonists. I like how your story has many elements in there and characters. It makes for an interesting read.

So, I never reviewed any of your chapters but I'd just like to show my appreciation here. (:

Yay! I'm so excited to hear news on this story! Will you be posting the third rewrite? I can't wait to hear more about Luce and Lilith! This is so funny, because last night, I was just re-reading some of this story cuz I love it so much! Can't wait to hear more!

~dramalover21

i'm still interested and i still can't wait :)

Well ill be reading the rewrite, the second book and definetly bying them when they come out:D...And maybe go a bit stalker:P

ok thats cool to know and i hope you get some sleep at some time

and there cant be too much Lucien time

its good that Lily gets some strength and a bit more back bone

omg you need to write more! I am having serious Lucien withdrawls here! :) and this chapter only makes me want more!

This story is absolutely amazing. I couldn't turn off my computer until I finished it last night, and I look forward to reading your next section. Awesome job! There were only a couple plot inconsistencies that brought me back to reality

hey... how's it going?

I was just wondering how your writing is coming along? I miss Luce and Lily.

Hope all is well. Please update!

xx

This is so original. I really like Candance and Lilith.

Hm... Is her father a Vampire? I mean that would be an ironic twist,but why aren't they taken to the shelter?

You've go me thoroughly ensnared!

Kudos on a gripping chapter!

When am I going to see something new from you? I re-read this chapter because I was missing Luce and Lillith.

Please keep us updated even if you're not updating!

:)

please update...i have been dying to hear what happens next. Does Lilith's father know about her agreement with Luce? I might have misse you sayinbg so.. but if you havent you might want to include it. good job so far...all of my friends love this stpory too and are absolutely obsessed with the outcome so far..so keep on writing!

Hey i just wanted to ask if you are going to post the second book on fictionpress as well?

The story is great by the way:)

OMG! yay i can't wait till the second book! Would you able to message me when you post it? Pretty please with a cherry on top ! . THANX