You are a beautiful, beautiful writer. I loved your story; I absolutely LOVED it. I wish you the best of luck in publishing (and don't worry, it'll, for sure, be published) ;)

I just finished reading your story and the sneak peek and I have to say your writing is fabulous! I absolutely loved 'The Slave of Heaven' and cant wait to read 'Let Sleeping Gods Lie'. :)

OMG! FAROUT THAT WAS SO GOOD!

ek! You are so awesome! I can't wait until the next book... omgomgomgomgomgomg!

i love you... lol

i love the date... its soo good that Luce is finally seeing lily... ek! You are the best author ever!

I personally think this has to of been my favorite chapter O.O No joke. I love it! I really hope you get a publisher! :) I .WAIT for your next book! The complexity you conveyed between "Luce" (cute nickname, Lilith is finally opening up to him! :D) and Lilith is amazing! Keep it up! :)

If you want my opinion i would not just make a blood hound a lulu. It adds a certain quality and diffrence if theres lilu who can do it cleanly and ones that just tear through a human body. It will give you more depth n the evil charachters if you keep it in. Btw the agent would get peeved. They would probably fear plagerism. Good luck!

This story is seriously awesome! You have got to tell me if or when this comes out as book and not rough draft:P

I likied this chapter. Although i must admit when i was reading the lucien and lilith dying scene i did think it was a bit sad becuase she not the wolf was dying. Yuou know?

No aislynn! I got my answer to the blood hound:P

Im starting to wonder if alecs not just being protective. As a matter of interest can blood hounds take human forms like the spirits or do they appear like in the dream? I would read on but is it mentioned?

OMG. When are you going to write the second book. I mean forget about the third rewrite of the fist book and write the second book NOW.

Oh, sorry, I worded that wrong. I didn't mean created races, but the way all of the races came together through other mythology and such... yeah.

:D

Whatever, I'm sure you get my meaning.

Goodness! This is a wonderful story, and if anyone can get published I'm sure you can. Your writing is nice and eloquent. :D

Most vampire stories are the same, same plot, same creatures, and so on. Yours is pretty imaginative, and I like your created races. :D

However, and I know you know this, there are a ton of errors throughout the story. Which I guess you'll fix in the next version, eh?

Also, I'm looking forward to book two or the rewrite of this book. :D

(I loved this sneak peak, it was adorable. [: )

You could lighlty introduce them at the concert whit luvcien? Anyway good chapter as usual!:P

If you do get published, (and here's my best wishes that you do), I will totally support you and buy the books. But please, till then, could you provide us with more sneak peaks of Lillith and Lucien goodness? :)

I'm a romantic, but there's something about Lillith and Lucien that grabs me like no other and refuses to let go. I think its because their relationship isn't stereotypical. It develops (not a product of youth's need to vent out their raging hormones) plus the two characters have their own lives past each other.

Also, it's rare to find such a unique, compelling world in the fictionpress realm. I love how intricate the cultures of the Nephilim are. Your world is easy to get lost into. :)

And your Lillith is such an easy character to sympathize with. She isn't your typical feisty heroine, as in most romances. She struggles with her strength, which makes her very realistic. I also love her dynamics with her family. Some authors don't put the family in too much, not realizing how vital they are to the growth of the character.

Also, I think Alec is totally yummy.

Though, just some advice for your rewrite, I think it would be better if you toned down the Anu and Spirits bit. Your writings are very descriptive, but maybe a more subtle prose would work better in those parts since it's difficult to describe such large, otherworldly personages. Instead of giving your readers a solid picture, guide them to their own interpretations.

Best wishes on your future endeavors!

Are you gonna bring this out as book? If you are im booking a copy hopefully:P