Reviews for Sam Can Can That Spam!
ranDUMM chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
Hey,

Haha, nice work! It was funny, but, for some constructive criticism, he rhyme seemed a bit forced. The syllables in each line didn't match either. I understand that it doesn't always have to match, but, when you rhyme, it usually helps to match the syllables as well, just to follow the pattern.

I did however, LOVE the idea! GREEN EGG AND HAM, one of my favourite Dr. Seuss books :D Well done :)

ranDUMM
SakuraLoveXox chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
i love sam i am 8D

this was fun to read, thanks for writing it xD