Reviews for A Million Miles Away
BrowellyPops chapter 7 . 5/5/2013
Ahahaha! I'm from Newcastle and I guess our accent doesn't sound so weird to me until it's written down :P You just have to read it as it looks and that's how I speak normally :) I love the story so far btw :) x
ellie.o chapter 30 . 1/24/2012
Huzzah! Jon's finally home! :) I'm surprised the story ended without a final note-but I'm looking forward to reading the sequel and it is a nice ending/beginning of something new.

I liked that Jon cared about Jasmine's wellbeing and was willing to go meet Ron.

Overall, I quite enjoyed reading 'A Million Miles Away' and didn't mind the "slow pace", as it felt like I got to know the characters better and it was good to see the relationship develop.

Thanks for sharing your writing with us! Hope that you continue writing more :)
ellie.o chapter 2 . 1/23/2012
ahahahah ... not a review, just a comment:

"MINOR CHILD - TREAT LIKE PLUTONIUM""

Awesome line.
ellie.o chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
An interesting beginning CorvaCarolina...I already sense heartbreak will ensue based on the Prologue...we shall see!

I'm not sure how much of a fan I am of the ordinary girl-rockstar plot, but I'm keeping an open mind-hope to be surprised! :)
N chapter 30 . 7/27/2011
hey long time no new chapter, hope to see one soon love this story! :D
peppy13 chapter 30 . 7/23/2011
I L-o-v-e this line:

"I let him out," a male voice said from the patio door, causing Jasmine to look up in surprise. Jon was leaning on the door frame, bathed in the rosy-orange light of the rising sun. Jasmine gave a little moan and ran across the yard to fly into his open arms.

such good imagery i could picture everything about it. Can't WAIT for the next chapter
Likeajellyfish chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
I just found your story and couldn't stop reading it until finished. It's a nice story, reminds me of the life back in the 90'es. I miss it. I have a few question, is this a revised story? I read some pieces about Strange Angel interviews by magazine was quite amusing and got the feeling that there were more interviews at first. And about the prologue, what is going to happen? You make me worried here. But nice thing you mention the Concorde :). Cheers.
Alicia Henmer chapter 30 . 7/7/2011
Really like it so far! :) even though you said it was slow (and you were right :P) it wasn't that bad and I really am enjoying the story so far.
Aurette chapter 33 . 6/23/2011
Haha, well, I have to review last chapter and this one at the same time (because of the renumbering). BUT I will say that I LOVE a guy with awesome hair so I don't blame Jasmine for indulging in that desire. :D And man, poor Jon, having to relive the whole thing with his wife. At least it wasn't his fault!

Haha, nice little fake out at the beginning of this chapter (though I had a feeling it was supposed to be.) Hmm, I wonder what's really going on between Marianne and Blackie, if anything.
Aurette chapter 32 . 6/20/2011
I feel like I missed something between this chapter and the last. Like we didn't see any of Jasmine's birthday dinner and the make out session. And I don't recall them talking about stalkers or death threats before. Was that a mistake or on purpose? Just wondering, and hoping I didn't miss anything important.
Aurette chapter 31 . 6/20/2011
Oh my god, Auto-tuners. I hate auto-tune with the fire of a thousand suns, but I suppose half the pop stars in the world today would be nowhere without them (autotuned singing makes my skin crawl! I can rant forever about it, but I won't because that's boring. :P). That's really sad about Nick's wife. I'm glad all the band members were in agreement about splitting. No hurt feelings!
Aurette chapter 30 . 6/20/2011
Minus Ron acting like a possessive jerk, this chapter was ultra cute. :) Yay kissing! And cuddling! Both are always nice. :D
Aurette chapter 27 . 6/20/2011
Oh no, Strange Angels is broken up! But how long did you say they were together, about ten years? Best go out on a high note, I suppose! And aww, Jon's thoughts at the end are so sweet and sad! I'm just awwwwing all over this story. I'm such a sap. :P
Aurette chapter 22 . 6/20/2011
Ooooh snap. The reappearance of Ron!

And I loved the "great escape" moment. Makes life a bit more interesting, I suppose, though I'd hate to have to do that for real like that! As much as I'd like to be a famous musician, I doubt I could deal with crazy fans on a regular basis!
Aurette chapter 21 . 6/20/2011
Haha, omg the Zima... reminds me of Gilmore Girls when Luke calls it "chick beer". I've never had one, but it just amuses me. :P And Oooy, Nichole sounds like a nasty piece of work. Jon and Jasmine are pretty cute in here (messing around on the chairs and stuff). Fills my little black heart with glee, let me tell you.
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