Reviews for A Million Miles Away |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, omg the Zima... reminds me of Gilmore Girls when Luke calls it "chick beer". I've never had one, but it just amuses me. :P And Oooy, Nichole sounds like a nasty piece of work. Jon and Jasmine are pretty cute in here (messing around on the chairs and stuff). Fills my little black heart with glee, let me tell you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I didn't expect for Jon to have been married, but it's not entirely surprising. What a sad story. I've seen normal couples with really toxic marriages, so I can't even fathom how much harder it would be if you were both famous and in the public eye, you know? I'm not reviewing every chapter because sometimes I forget because I want to read the next one. :P But I'm glad you're happy I'm going along as I read. I don't do it very often, but I'm finding myself very invested in this story so I can't help but share my thoughts and such as I go along. I really like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just want to say, I find it very refreshing that Jasmine's so honest. It always makes me cringe when characters tell outrageous lies or withhold truths just to manipulate other characters. I understand that it's often to drive the plot along, but often times it's so out of character it drives me insane. Very rarely have I found an author pull off that kind of character without making me hate them. Buuuut Jasmine's not like that and I can wholly appreciate that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe! I love Jon's subversive tactics to get away from his own party. I hate parties, so I'm right there with him, running away to a more quiet place. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww, poor Jasmine! I do however like how you're setting this up. It feels realistic to me (not having the rock star be all over Jasmine, etc.), and Jasmine feels exactly how I'd feel in this situation. Although I just look like I'm in high school (I still get mistaken for a mid-teen alllll the time. It'll be nice when I'm forty but not so great when I'm nearly twenty-five!). Anyway, I like that this is slow moving. You're taking your time, and that's good sometimes. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe, and everything is set up. I love that Marianne has music connections to get atershow passes... makes it more realistic than a lot of stories on here where the band member sees the chick in the crowd and falls in love or something. :P Anyway, can't wait to see where this goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh, I like this story already. I love stories about rock stars and bands, so I was predisposed to like it. :D Also, I like that it seems to be set in the mid-nineties. Not very common on Fictionpress, so that'll be really interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very happy you finally updated! this story is one of my favorites, i am looking forward to reading more...soon! haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I realized I haven't reviewed your story yet xD Anyway, I'm really happy that you're updating this story now! It's really amazing, I wish there were more stories similar to this. I really like Jon and Jasmine together, they're a cute couple. Though Mish reminds me of Yoko Ono - except with talent but I wish Blackie ends up okay. Keep it coming! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad that you're posting again for this story, I've missed it. This is such a fun read, I do look foward to the updates. Can't wait for the rest. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I Love this story, so far its one of the best ones i have read on this site! i have read all 40 chapters in the last few days and cant wait for you to update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() IT'S AMAZING! I've missed your updates! |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS IS SO F-IN GOOD! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love! Love! Love! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Nice plot twist with Shawnya. I actually thought for a moment he'd sleep with her, then he said 'Jas' and I thought, *Oh good*. Keep going :) BxC |