Reviews for i dream a little smaller
Isca chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
"I love what I used to take for granted." Good message! :)
tangerine dreamer chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
this is a great outlook on life, and i think you captured the kind of "looking back on things" kind of feeling (does that make sense). i love it. keep up the great work!
glimpses from an ivory tower chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
You have some beautiful imagery here... "murmured dreams of cottontail rabbits" is a favorite.

The poem evokes a sense of nostalgia, for me, at least, and the third stanza is especially bittersweet. "I dream of smaller things" really struck me; it's the essence of the poem, something I've felt before many times myself.

I'm extremely inarticulate tonight, so pardon the disorganized review. But really, I think this is beautiful.