Reviews for The Sermon
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
Ja, so sind sie. Die Kinder einer bekannten sind heulend aus dem katholischen Kindergarten gekommen, weil man ihnen erzählt hat, ihre lutherische Mutter käme in die Hölle.

He’s a poet of living masterpieces,

the cmposer (composer?) of the music of the spheres

Ist sehr schön ausgedrückt, wie überhaupt das ganze Gedicht
VivaLaQueen chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
I can relate to this.

:]

Just a little thing. You forgot the "O" in cmposer.

"the cmposer of the music of the spheres."

Other than that, good job.
farrahness chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
Wow! I love it. I would have gotten ticked off if someone told me my dad wasn't loved by God, either.

I feel the same way about God. He loves all of his children, in my opinion, instead of picking and choosing.

Excellent work, Laura.

- Grace