Reviews for May 2003
SpottedStar chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Touching. I'm not a stranger to death, my father is a funeral director and I've seen how it imprints it's way onto peoples minds and tears them down. The fact that you had the strength to write this poem makes you a very admirable being. Good job.

SpottedStar
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
i felt goosebumps and still feeling them, i love all of my many cousins and just imagining one of them 'gone' is unbearable..i'm so sorry...this poem had so much feelings into it, so much sincerity, loved it..
Aistaraina chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
I can feel the emotion through this piece. Your use of words is really good. It has a nice beat to it too.

Though there are two spelling mistakes. In the line,"Two some ones," I think some ones should only be someones. Also you use the word to as in to fast and to far off. I think you might want to use the word too in there instead.

Nnaliseaai