|Reviews for May 2003|
| SpottedStar chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
Touching. I'm not a stranger to death, my father is a funeral director and I've seen how it imprints it's way onto peoples minds and tears them down. The fact that you had the strength to write this poem makes you a very admirable being. Good job.
| Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
i felt goosebumps and still feeling them, i love all of my many cousins and just imagining one of them 'gone' is unbearable..i'm so sorry...this poem had so much feelings into it, so much sincerity, loved it..
| Aistaraina chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
I can feel the emotion through this piece. Your use of words is really good. It has a nice beat to it too.
Though there are two spelling mistakes. In the line,"Two some ones," I think some ones should only be someones. Also you use the word to as in to fast and to far off. I think you might want to use the word too in there instead.