Reviews for Speechless
Tuft of Fluff chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
I loved this! The way you showed the thoughts and what was actually said was perfect, and having the last two lines in bold was a nice touch. Great job.
tangledwebweweave chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
Very nice. It started out slightly confusing, but I loved it very much. That's how I am with my crush, and I think everything I say and do is so stupid.

Nice format (kinda like a novel) and imagery. People can relate to this...a lot. And it feels very real.

Favorite line: "It'd be easier if I had a pencil,/I could erase this awkward silence."

even though it was hard, that one jumped out at me.

Good luck and great job! :)