Reviews for Aloof
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
This poem really makes me think and its like intense and interesting. Wonderful vocabulary. Very well written. "(Those



that whisper

through touch)" Just loved these lines! I enjoyed reading this nice job!
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
Lovely, I loved the last question that you ponder here, almost as if daring the reader to look deeper again to find it. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

x.Miss.Twiztid.x chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
It gives me this intense existentialist kind of vibe...I love it. And it flows beautifully.
Elephant-Artist chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
The first stanza is my favorite one. The whole entire poem is awesome. Please Read and review my stuff.
evm chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
I like "tendrils/that whisper/through touch" the best because of the consonance, and I love that the last line is "Why?"

I think I like the last stanza so much, because for me, that part of the poem was the most stream of consciousness-y. The second and third stanzas fit together almost to logically for the rest of the poem.
cassandraparkes chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
I love your poetry.

this feels so whispery and soft.