Reviews for Aloof
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
This poem really makes me think and its like intense and interesting. Wonderful vocabulary. Very well written. "(Those

lingering

tendrils

that whisper

through touch)" Just loved these lines! I enjoyed reading this nice job!
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
Lovely, I loved the last question that you ponder here, almost as if daring the reader to look deeper again to find it. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.
x.Miss.Twiztid.x chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
It gives me this intense existentialist kind of vibe...I love it. And it flows beautifully.
Elephant-Artist chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
The first stanza is my favorite one. The whole entire poem is awesome. Please Read and review my stuff.
evm chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
I like "tendrils/that whisper/through touch" the best because of the consonance, and I love that the last line is "Why?"

I think I like the last stanza so much, because for me, that part of the poem was the most stream of consciousness-y. The second and third stanzas fit together almost to logically for the rest of the poem.
cassandraparkes chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
I love your poetry.

this feels so whispery and soft.

perfect.