This was really confusing to read. Such as why was he so mad at Ashley and why did he say that he didn’t believe her? Why was the conversation recorded in the first place? There’s just a lot of things that don’t line up. Plus we don’t see enough personality and chemistry between the couple to make a relationship seem believable; like Zach didn’t even seem to really like her. It could have been a little longer and a little better worded in my opinion, otherwise it would have been good.

You wrote 3 of my favorite stories (including one that's in my top 2) and I never knew you were the same author. I have to start paying attention more :)

I loved this story, a ton! It was awesome and I hope you always keep writing!

That was so adorable! Awe! So cute...

Aww, that's adorable! And the articles and pictures she brought in were an insanely awesome idea ] Loved the one-shot!

This is so cute! And hilarious. Love it :)

How cute! Uncliche and quirky; I like that. :") A good light read with all the elements of an awesome story. And Zach and Ashley are so cute together! :D

They are so bloody cute!

Beautiful story!

xx

Ali

Very well written story :) It made me smile

Keep up the awesome work :)

"strangest couple in school" god ill say but its still a nice story

That was so adorable. I have nothing else to say. I loved it.

sweet.

very cute! so adorably cute! :D i love how they're on totally different ends of the spectrum, but there's just something that draws them to each other.

:)

-toffeecakesxox.

aw. I wanna know more

hands down to you.

:) because of you, i changed the place of the story i'm making. it'll be in hell, michigan. thank you.

like i said. hands down to you.

this story is great.

-threm

aww...how cute! I liked the originality in it! :)