Reviews for She Loves Him
esthaelum chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
I love how you described this! It's short, but I just adore how you wrote it out by paying attention to small detail. I also liked it when Ness' thoughts were saying how madly in love she was with him.
lookingwest chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Nice little bit here, I hope to see more of your writing in the future!
W.S.Ravensoul chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
Hey long time no write. How are you? Got an email alert that you were writing again and decided to have a peek. I must say I wasn't disappointed. I found your descriptions of unsung love most eloquent. As to your thought about taking it further I believe you have left it with a great device to take the story further. Namely looking at the stars. Destinies can be percieved gazing through the stars. Shooting stars can make a lovers wish come true. Even something happening to cause them to hold hands. You have lots of possibilities and considering the quality of your work at the moment I would definitely encourage you to continue the story. TTFN.


Beksky chapter 1 . 1/30/2009

That was really great!

It would make a great story! :)
Christy Leigh Stewart chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
How sweet! It is good alone but you might try making it a longer thing.