|Reviews for Hard to Breathe|
| DraganMir chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
This is perhaps my favorite poem of yours. As always the rhymes are great, the word selection keeps the reader interested.
I like the allusion, it sounds sounds familiar...I wonder where it's from. ; )
Beautiful as always, "always write!" -GM
| TheBeautyOfTheGrave chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
Beautiful, I can relate so much to this.
Keep up the writing. Love the title btw :D