Reviews for A Night in Palestine
CRaZy-OdIN chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Very moving. But ofcourse I'd expect no less from you. Truely an abominal subject indeed.

p.s. sorry I havent reviewed in ages.
najat chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
wow! the poem is reli gud n very emotional and touching, good work
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
Beautiful poem. Very well written. Really emotional. A very beautiful tribute. Well done.

Vikki x
Thomas J. Poe chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
Touching. Times really are hard for them at the moment.
Jem the writer chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
This is very emotionally written, and the snippets of the other language managed to fit in perfectly with the poem.

The meter of the poem seemed a little off balance in some of the stanzas.

Other than that, the emotion was very well written with this and you chose perfect words for such a tragic event.

Keep up the good work,

JEM
Spurlunk chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
I like this poem. You've captured a mood and a place perfectly, though sadly the time period could be almost anytime in the last fifty years.