I love it!
And liked how they had twins!
Love it!

I know this is a bit late but congratulations!

I enjoyed your story. just maybe wish there had been more action scenes or something, since she is supposed to be badass. if ur still taking suggestions for rewriting stories, i would add a few kick ass scenes in this one. but other than that, delilah and isaiah were really adorable together.

is it bad that i kinda hope isaiah gets into a bout of trouble so i can witness delilah go all badass and get him out of there? i want some action! haha

Awesome story

i really was expecting a happy ending when i was reading the earlier chapters.

but then when delilah's nightmares came and i got impatient and read the first chapter of the sequel i changed my mind and figured maybe u will go down the tragic road.

well, maybe u did at first but changed ur mind?

either way i love happy endings so im totally satisfied with how everything goes. eventhough indeed it's way too simple.

the general idea of this story is not out of the ordinary but it was entertaining and isaiah just so sweet. he is just an angel. a sizzling hot angel ;)

i loved this! there characters where perfect.

OMG, i love the name Emily, one of my bestest best friends names is Emily! Love the story so far! Its awesome.

I don't have anything yet so bare with me. Can't wait to read the sequel as well!

emiko-storywriter

Wow, I love it! It's different than anything I have read...because honestly, i thought either she was going to kill him in the end or they would kill each other so they could die together or Derek would have both of them killed...but I'm not saying I'm not happy, by no means...BECAUSE I LOVE HAPPY ENDINGS!Once again, your versatility captivates me:)

So, did Isaiah kill Freddie? I guess I will just have to find out and finish reading...

Hey,I haven't got very far into your story, but just wanted to let you know that so far it's very intriguing!But... one slight critism, if you dont mind. I find you write the characters speech in a confusing manner so its hard to figure out who says what, especially in the continious dialogue parts. Other than this, so far a big Thumbs Up.

Thank you for a great story! Darkness and romance in a mix, it's cool. I didn't realize there were three more chapters before. I hope to read the sequel soon!

Dear MorbidAngelX,

I must tell you, I absolutely love your story.

I don't know if you will write a Chapter 21, but I thank you for what you have written, I have had a great pleasure reading it.

Have you ever considered publishing? I feel like I was reading a novel instead of stuff! You kick ass!

If you don't mind my asking, where do you get your inspiration from?

Well, best of luck,

Chimo

AH it's over! NOO...lol this was a great story and I LOVED it, seriously! I can't wait for the sequel and I am so glad everything turned out okay for those to love birds...~Angela

mY THOUGHTS were exactly what delilah was thinking...could things be too good? Everything seems to be falling in place almost perfectly, it almost feels like something bad might happen soon, though i hope not.